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Teks daripada BagpipeGirl - English

    • My CPE Writing: an Article

  • My next marvelous decade.
  • Thousands of people all over the world constantly strive to be successful.
    • Although there is no clear image of a universal success, we still think that it is necessary to obtain certain things at different stages of one's life.
    • Here is my vision of the achievements to accomplish in next 10 years.
    • First of all, I consider it vital to become a really professional teacher.
    • I am so lucky to have found a rewarding occupation, so I feel like the most productive time of my life has come and I am obliged to do anything possible (or impossible if required) to work my way up to the top of my career.
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life so I am going to make an effort and demosntrate superior performance.
    • Secondly, I think of my thirtieth as the most favourable moment to build a close-knit family, which, I hope, will become my main support in the years to follow.
    • Finding a right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an exclusion in any case.
    • Finally, my next 10 years are going to become the time to re-invent myself in a lot of ways.
    • Reaching personal harmony is paramount at this point since the third decade is a milestone on the long road to have our personality shaped and strength and weak points completely apparent.
    • I definitely fancy using this period of time to accept myself as I am and eventually comprehend what it is like to be me.
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we learn to dream when we are little, we succeed in planning when we are young and we ought to live our dreams when we are adult people.
    • I am convinced that exploring my personality, creating a caring and loving family and advancing the career are the 3 key ingredients of my personal success that should be reached in the next fabulous 10 years.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

  • Title
  • Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
    • Although there is no clear image of a universal success, we still think that it is necessary to obtain certain things at different stages of one's life.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Although there is no clear imagedea of a universal success, we still think that it is necessary to obtain certain things at different stages of one's life.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
    • I am so lucky to have found a rewarding occupation, so I feel like the most productive time of my life has come and I am obliged to do anything possible (or impossible if required) to work my way up to the top of my career.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I am so lucky to have found a rewarding occupation, so I feel like the most productive time of my life has come and I am obliged to do anything possible (or impossible, if required) to work my way up to the top of my career.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life so I am going to make an effort and demosntrate superior performance.
      Undi sekarang!
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life, so I am going to make an effort andto demosnstrate superior performance.
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life so I am going to make an effort and demosnstrate superior performance.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • Secondly, I think of my thirtieth as the most favourable moment to build a close-knit family, which, I hope, will become my main support in the years to follow.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Secondly, I think of my thirtiethes as the most favourable moment to build a close-knit family, which, I hope, will become my main support in the years to follow.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
    • Finding a right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an exclusion in any case.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Finding athe right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an excluseption, in any case.
    • Finding athe right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an exclusion in any case.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9
  • Ayat 10
  • Ayat 11
    • Reaching personal harmony is paramount at this point since the third decade is a milestone on the long road to have our personality shaped and strength and weak points completely apparent.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Reaching personal harmony is paramount at this point since the third decade is a milestone on the long road to have our personality shaped and our streongth and weak points completely apparent.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11
  • Ayat 12
    • I definitely fancy using this period of time to accept myself as I am and eventually comprehend what it is like to be me.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I definitely fancy using this period of time to accept myself as who I am and eventually comprehend what it is like to be meyself.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 12TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 12
  • Ayat 13
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we learn to dream when we are little, we succeed in planning when we are young and we ought to live our dreams when we are adult people.
      Undi sekarang!
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we learn to dream when we are little, we succeed in planning when we are young, and we ought to live our dreams when we are adult peoples.
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we should learn to dream when we are little, wethen we can succeed in planning when we are young and we ought to live our dreams when we arbecome adult people.s.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 13TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 13
  • Ayat 14
    • I am convinced that exploring my personality, creating a caring and loving family and advancing the career are the 3 key ingredients of my personal success that should be reached in the next fabulous 10 years.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I am convinced that exploring my personality, creating a caring and loving family, and advancing themy career are the 3three key ingredients tof my personal success that should be reached in the next fabulous 10ten years.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14