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Text from BagpipeGirl - English

    • My CPE Writing: an Article

  • My next marvelous decade.
  • Thousands of people all over the world constantly strive to be successful.
    • Although there is no clear image of a universal success, we still think that it is necessary to obtain certain things at different stages of one's life.
    • Here is my vision of the achievements to accomplish in next 10 years.
    • First of all, I consider it vital to become a really professional teacher.
    • I am so lucky to have found a rewarding occupation, so I feel like the most productive time of my life has come and I am obliged to do anything possible (or impossible if required) to work my way up to the top of my career.
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life so I am going to make an effort and demosntrate superior performance.
    • Secondly, I think of my thirtieth as the most favourable moment to build a close-knit family, which, I hope, will become my main support in the years to follow.
    • Finding a right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an exclusion in any case.
    • Finally, my next 10 years are going to become the time to re-invent myself in a lot of ways.
    • Reaching personal harmony is paramount at this point since the third decade is a milestone on the long road to have our personality shaped and strength and weak points completely apparent.
    • I definitely fancy using this period of time to accept myself as I am and eventually comprehend what it is like to be me.
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we learn to dream when we are little, we succeed in planning when we are young and we ought to live our dreams when we are adult people.
    • I am convinced that exploring my personality, creating a caring and loving family and advancing the career are the 3 key ingredients of my personal success that should be reached in the next fabulous 10 years.

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    • Although there is no clear image of a universal success, we still think that it is necessary to obtain certain things at different stages of one's life.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Although there is no clear imagedea of a universal success, we still think that it is necessary to obtain certain things at different stages of one's life.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
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  • Frazo 6
    • I am so lucky to have found a rewarding occupation, so I feel like the most productive time of my life has come and I am obliged to do anything possible (or impossible if required) to work my way up to the top of my career.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I am so lucky to have found a rewarding occupation, so I feel like the most productive time of my life has come and I am obliged to do anything possible (or impossible, if required) to work my way up to the top of my career.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life so I am going to make an effort and demosntrate superior performance.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life, so I am going to make an effort andto demosnstrate superior performance.
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life so I am going to make an effort and demosnstrate superior performance.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
    • Secondly, I think of my thirtieth as the most favourable moment to build a close-knit family, which, I hope, will become my main support in the years to follow.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Secondly, I think of my thirtiethes as the most favourable moment to build a close-knit family, which, I hope, will become my main support in the years to follow.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • Finding a right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an exclusion in any case.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Finding athe right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an excluseption, in any case.
    • Finding athe right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an exclusion in any case.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
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    • Reaching personal harmony is paramount at this point since the third decade is a milestone on the long road to have our personality shaped and strength and weak points completely apparent.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Reaching personal harmony is paramount at this point since the third decade is a milestone on the long road to have our personality shaped and our streongth and weak points completely apparent.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 11
  • Frazo 12
    • I definitely fancy using this period of time to accept myself as I am and eventually comprehend what it is like to be me.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I definitely fancy using this period of time to accept myself as who I am and eventually comprehend what it is like to be meyself.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 12
  • Frazo 13
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we learn to dream when we are little, we succeed in planning when we are young and we ought to live our dreams when we are adult people.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we learn to dream when we are little, we succeed in planning when we are young, and we ought to live our dreams when we are adult peoples.
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we should learn to dream when we are little, wethen we can succeed in planning when we are young and we ought to live our dreams when we arbecome adult people.s.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 13
  • Frazo 14
    • I am convinced that exploring my personality, creating a caring and loving family and advancing the career are the 3 key ingredients of my personal success that should be reached in the next fabulous 10 years.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • I am convinced that exploring my personality, creating a caring and loving family, and advancing themy career are the 3three key ingredients tof my personal success that should be reached in the next fabulous 10ten years.
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 14