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BagpipeGirl'den mesaj - English

    • My CPE Writing: an Article

  • My next marvelous decade.
  • Thousands of people all over the world constantly strive to be successful.
    • Although there is no clear image of a universal success, we still think that it is necessary to obtain certain things at different stages of one's life.
    • Here is my vision of the achievements to accomplish in next 10 years.
    • First of all, I consider it vital to become a really professional teacher.
    • I am so lucky to have found a rewarding occupation, so I feel like the most productive time of my life has come and I am obliged to do anything possible (or impossible if required) to work my way up to the top of my career.
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life so I am going to make an effort and demosntrate superior performance.
    • Secondly, I think of my thirtieth as the most favourable moment to build a close-knit family, which, I hope, will become my main support in the years to follow.
    • Finding a right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an exclusion in any case.
    • Finally, my next 10 years are going to become the time to re-invent myself in a lot of ways.
    • Reaching personal harmony is paramount at this point since the third decade is a milestone on the long road to have our personality shaped and strength and weak points completely apparent.
    • I definitely fancy using this period of time to accept myself as I am and eventually comprehend what it is like to be me.
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we learn to dream when we are little, we succeed in planning when we are young and we ought to live our dreams when we are adult people.
    • I am convinced that exploring my personality, creating a caring and loving family and advancing the career are the 3 key ingredients of my personal success that should be reached in the next fabulous 10 years.

Lütfen, Her cümleyi düzeltmek için yardım edin ! - English

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    • Although there is no clear image of a universal success, we still think that it is necessary to obtain certain things at different stages of one's life.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Although there is no clear imagedea of a universal success, we still think that it is necessary to obtain certain things at different stages of one's life.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 3YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
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    • I am so lucky to have found a rewarding occupation, so I feel like the most productive time of my life has come and I am obliged to do anything possible (or impossible if required) to work my way up to the top of my career.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I am so lucky to have found a rewarding occupation, so I feel like the most productive time of my life has come and I am obliged to do anything possible (or impossible, if required) to work my way up to the top of my career.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 6YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6
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    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life so I am going to make an effort and demosntrate superior performance.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life, so I am going to make an effort andto demosnstrate superior performance.
    • It is most likely to give me a sense of security for the rest of my life so I am going to make an effort and demosnstrate superior performance.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 7YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 7
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    • Secondly, I think of my thirtieth as the most favourable moment to build a close-knit family, which, I hope, will become my main support in the years to follow.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Secondly, I think of my thirtiethes as the most favourable moment to build a close-knit family, which, I hope, will become my main support in the years to follow.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 8YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 8
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    • Finding a right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an exclusion in any case.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Finding athe right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an excluseption, in any case.
    • Finding athe right man and discovering the joy of maternity – I see these things as the very essence of every woman's life and I am not an exclusion in any case.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 9YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 9
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    • Reaching personal harmony is paramount at this point since the third decade is a milestone on the long road to have our personality shaped and strength and weak points completely apparent.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • Reaching personal harmony is paramount at this point since the third decade is a milestone on the long road to have our personality shaped and our streongth and weak points completely apparent.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 11YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 11
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    • To conclude, I would like to say that we learn to dream when we are little, we succeed in planning when we are young and we ought to live our dreams when we are adult people.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we learn to dream when we are little, we succeed in planning when we are young, and we ought to live our dreams when we are adult peoples.
    • To conclude, I would like to say that we should learn to dream when we are little, wethen we can succeed in planning when we are young and we ought to live our dreams when we arbecome adult people.s.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 13YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 13
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    • I am convinced that exploring my personality, creating a caring and loving family and advancing the career are the 3 key ingredients of my personal success that should be reached in the next fabulous 10 years.
      Şİmdi oyla!
    • I am convinced that exploring my personality, creating a caring and loving family, and advancing themy career are the 3three key ingredients tof my personal success that should be reached in the next fabulous 10ten years.
    • YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle
 14YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 14