Korreksies

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  • CLUBS FOR EVERYONE?

    • Whenever starting a new phase in one’s academic life, it is worth-wondering what else other than attending the mandatory curricular classes can be done on campus.
    • This especially applies if you are beginning your university life.
    • At first, when I enrolled Davidson’s college, I was of the opinion that choosing just one club to join would be a tough task, as plenty of them were appealing. i learnt that is fair to claim that getting an overview of the facilities and the people in every club is the best way to decide.
    • Hence, I visited the science club and refused to join it as they were using old machinery that was no longer wanted in newly refurbished laboratories upstairs.
    • Likewise, the book club has outdated novels which did not caught my eye.
    • Conversely the arts club displayed a large assortment of artsy materials and people seem to be overflowing with harmony when working there.
    • No sooner had I joined the art club that I realised how much of a right choice I made.
    • Unfortunately, after five quarters there I realised I was not evolving as an artist, I was approaching my senior year and I had no clue on how to get into the workplace.
    • Therefore, I moved to a club that I thought more suitable for me, the alumni club, in where I could receive useful career advice.
    • Nowadays, is not hard to see that most higher education institutions provide a wide offer of extracurricular activities, teams, clubs and so forth.
    • In this regard, it is worth-noticing that not only is gathering information about them important, but also to get to know them beforehand.
    • Furthermore, interest may change, thereby I strongly encourage everybody to keep an open mind and change activities our clubs at their leisure whenever they feel the need to do so.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Sentence 1
    • Whenever starting a new phase in one’s academic life, it is worth-wondering what else other than attending the mandatory curricular classes can be done on campus.
      Stem nou!
    • Whenever starting a new phase in one’s academic life, it is worth- wondering what else other than attending the mandatory xtracurricular classactivities can be donepursued on campus.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 1VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 1
  • Sentence 2
  • Sentence 3
    • At first, when I enrolled Davidson’s college, I was of the opinion that choosing just one club to join would be a tough task, as plenty of them were appealing. i learnt that is fair to claim that getting an overview of the facilities and the people in every club is the best way to decide.
      Stem nou!
    • At first, when I enrolled in Davidson’s c College, I was of the opinionbelieved that choosing just one club to join would be a tough task, as plenty of themso many clubs were appealing. iI learnt that is fair to claimed that getting an overview of the facilities and the people in every club is the best way to decide which ones to join.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3
  • Sentence 4
    • Hence, I visited the science club and refused to join it as they were using old machinery that was no longer wanted in newly refurbished laboratories upstairs.
      Stem nou!
    • HencFor example, I visited the sScience cClub, and refused to join it as they werefound out that it was using old machineryequipment that was no longer wanted in newly refurbished laboratories upstairsanywhere else. I decided not to join as a result.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4
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  • Sentence 6
    • Conversely the arts club displayed a large assortment of artsy materials and people seem to be overflowing with harmony when working there.
      Stem nou!
    • ConverselyHowever, the arts club displayed a largdiverse assortment of artsy materials, and the people working there seemed to be overflowing with harmony when working thereppiness.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 6VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 6
  • Sentence 7
  • Sentence 8
    • Unfortunately, after five quarters there I realised I was not evolving as an artist, I was approaching my senior year and I had no clue on how to get into the workplace.
      Stem nou!
    • Unfortunately, after five quarsemesters there, I realiszed that I was not evolving as an artist,; I was approaching my senior year, and I had no clue as ton how to gain entrancet into the workplace.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 8VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 8
  • Sentence 9
    • Therefore, I moved to a club that I thought more suitable for me, the alumni club, in where I could receive useful career advice.
      Stem nou!
    • Therefore, I movswitched into a club that I thought would be more suitable for me,: the alumni club, in where I could. In this club, I received useful career advice.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 9VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 9
  • Sentence 10
    • Nowadays, is not hard to see that most higher education institutions provide a wide offer of extracurricular activities, teams, clubs and so forth.
      Stem nou!
    • Nowadays, is not hard to see that mostmost institutions of higher -education institutions provide a wide offering of extracurricular activities, teams, clubs and so forthon.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 10VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 10
  • Sentence 11
    • In this regard, it is worth-noticing that not only is gathering information about them important, but also to get to know them beforehand.
      Stem nou!
    • In this regard, it is worth- noticing that not only is gathering information about them important, but also to get to knowresearching clubs important, but also acquainting oneself with them beforehand.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 11VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 11
  • Sentence 12
    • Furthermore, interest may change, thereby I strongly encourage everybody to keep an open mind and change activities our clubs at their leisure whenever they feel the need to do so.
      Stem nou!
    • Furthermore, interest may change, t. Therebyfore, I strongly encourage everybody to keep an open minds and to change activities our clubs at their leisure whenever they feel the need to do so. if needed.
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 12VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 12