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  • CLUBS FOR EVERYONE?

    • Whenever starting a new phase in one’s academic life, it is worth-wondering what else other than attending the mandatory curricular classes can be done on campus.
    • This especially applies if you are beginning your university life.
    • At first, when I enrolled Davidson’s college, I was of the opinion that choosing just one club to join would be a tough task, as plenty of them were appealing. i learnt that is fair to claim that getting an overview of the facilities and the people in every club is the best way to decide.
    • Hence, I visited the science club and refused to join it as they were using old machinery that was no longer wanted in newly refurbished laboratories upstairs.
    • Likewise, the book club has outdated novels which did not caught my eye.
    • Conversely the arts club displayed a large assortment of artsy materials and people seem to be overflowing with harmony when working there.
    • No sooner had I joined the art club that I realised how much of a right choice I made.
    • Unfortunately, after five quarters there I realised I was not evolving as an artist, I was approaching my senior year and I had no clue on how to get into the workplace.
    • Therefore, I moved to a club that I thought more suitable for me, the alumni club, in where I could receive useful career advice.
    • Nowadays, is not hard to see that most higher education institutions provide a wide offer of extracurricular activities, teams, clubs and so forth.
    • In this regard, it is worth-noticing that not only is gathering information about them important, but also to get to know them beforehand.
    • Furthermore, interest may change, thereby I strongly encourage everybody to keep an open mind and change activities our clubs at their leisure whenever they feel the need to do so.

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    • Whenever starting a new phase in one’s academic life, it is worth-wondering what else other than attending the mandatory curricular classes can be done on campus.
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    • Whenever starting a new phase in one’s academic life, it is worth- wondering what else other than attending the mandatory xtracurricular classactivities can be donepursued on campus.
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  • Satz 3
    • At first, when I enrolled Davidson’s college, I was of the opinion that choosing just one club to join would be a tough task, as plenty of them were appealing. i learnt that is fair to claim that getting an overview of the facilities and the people in every club is the best way to decide.
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    • At first, when I enrolled in Davidson’s c College, I was of the opinionbelieved that choosing just one club to join would be a tough task, as plenty of themso many clubs were appealing. iI learnt that is fair to claimed that getting an overview of the facilities and the people in every club is the best way to decide which ones to join.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 3
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    • Hence, I visited the science club and refused to join it as they were using old machinery that was no longer wanted in newly refurbished laboratories upstairs.
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    • HencFor example, I visited the sScience cClub, and refused to join it as they werefound out that it was using old machineryequipment that was no longer wanted in newly refurbished laboratories upstairsanywhere else. I decided not to join as a result.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 4
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    • Conversely the arts club displayed a large assortment of artsy materials and people seem to be overflowing with harmony when working there.
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    • ConverselyHowever, the arts club displayed a largdiverse assortment of artsy materials, and the people working there seemed to be overflowing with harmony when working thereppiness.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 6
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    • Unfortunately, after five quarters there I realised I was not evolving as an artist, I was approaching my senior year and I had no clue on how to get into the workplace.
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    • Unfortunately, after five quarsemesters there, I realiszed that I was not evolving as an artist,; I was approaching my senior year, and I had no clue as ton how to gain entrancet into the workplace.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 8
  • Satz 9
    • Therefore, I moved to a club that I thought more suitable for me, the alumni club, in where I could receive useful career advice.
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    • Therefore, I movswitched into a club that I thought would be more suitable for me,: the alumni club, in where I could. In this club, I received useful career advice.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 9Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 9
  • Satz 10
    • Nowadays, is not hard to see that most higher education institutions provide a wide offer of extracurricular activities, teams, clubs and so forth.
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    • Nowadays, is not hard to see that mostmost institutions of higher -education institutions provide a wide offering of extracurricular activities, teams, clubs and so forthon.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 10
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    • In this regard, it is worth-noticing that not only is gathering information about them important, but also to get to know them beforehand.
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    • In this regard, it is worth- noticing that not only is gathering information about them important, but also to get to knowresearching clubs important, but also acquainting oneself with them beforehand.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 11Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 11
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    • Furthermore, interest may change, thereby I strongly encourage everybody to keep an open mind and change activities our clubs at their leisure whenever they feel the need to do so.
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    • Furthermore, interest may change, t. Therebyfore, I strongly encourage everybody to keep an open minds and to change activities our clubs at their leisure whenever they feel the need to do so. if needed.
    • Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 12Füge eine neue Korrektur hinzu! - Satz 12