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    • We are interested in the use of a pedagogical device called sociodrama, created by Jacob Lévy Moreno in 1922, whose main characteristics are: free expansion, play, spontaneity and creativity.
    • This is the theatrical improvisation of a problematic situation, a group of people playing freely in order to achieve objectives such as awareness, diagnosis, evaluation, prediction or discover the potentials of a group.
    • Thus, we wanted to test this device, which was more developed in America, in a third class of a public establishment in Caluire et Cuire, France.

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    • We are interested in the use of a pedagogical device called sociodrama, created by Jacob Lévy Moreno in 1922, whose main characteristics are: free expansion, play, spontaneity and creativity.
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    • We are interested in the use of a pedagogical device called sociodrama, created by Jacob Lévy Moreno in 1922, whoseof which the main characteristics are: free expansion, play, spontaneity and creativity.
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    • This is the theatrical improvisation of a problematic situation, a group of people playing freely in order to achieve objectives such as awareness, diagnosis, evaluation, prediction or discover the potentials of a group.
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    • This is the theatrical improvisation of a problematic situation, a group of people playing freely in order to achieve objectives such as awareness, diagnosis, evaluation, prediction or to discover the potentials of a group.
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    • This is the theatrical improvisation of a problematic situation,; a group of people playing freely in order to achieve objectives such as awareness, diagnosis, evaluation, prediction or to discover the potentials of a group.
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    • Thus, we wanted to test this device, which was more developed in America, in a third class of a public establishment in Caluire et Cuire, France.
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    • Thus, we wanted to test this device, which was more developed (more thoroughly ) in America, in a third (year?) class of a public establishment (school) in Caluire et Cuire, France.
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    • Thus, wWe wanted to test this device, which was more developed in America, in a third class of a public establishment, in Caluire et Cuire, France.
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