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  • IV.University ( last part)

    • (Hi everyone, please pay attention to this text, it's really important for me :) I'd like to thank you if you could able to correct it.) Some student are financially helped in them studies by stock exchanges(scholarships) .
  • We studied a text which describes the situation of Jojo a basketball star.
    • He has been admitted at university thanks to his sports results(profits).
    • Jojo is intelligent , clever , bright but he is lazy .
    • He starts worrying about fundamental choices for his future life .
    • So he has got to do academic classes .
    • Sometimes people does Jojo's homework to help him and also because he's an athlete.
    • For athlete , people are coach and teachers because of his sportive statut .
    • It means that Sport is more important than academic classes for this kind of persons .
  • Finally sometimes universities change the students.
  • We studied a text where is to detail the chronology of a student and the reaction of his close relations.
  • In 16 months, he wanted to change orientation.
    • His clothing style had change as well as his attitude.
    • About his parents they remark that he became open minded , an became more mature .
    • Thus, university is very renowned in United States but it's not really advantageous to the students who have to pay off their students debts during several years.

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