Text von Cooldy - English
IV.University ( last part)
- (Hi everyone, please pay attention to this text, it's really important for me :) I'd like to thank you if you could able to correct it.) Some student are financially helped in them studies by stock exchanges(scholarships) .
- We studied a text which describes the situation of Jojo a basketball star.
- He has been admitted at university thanks to his sports results(profits).
- Jojo is intelligent , clever , bright but he is lazy .
- He starts worrying about fundamental choices for his future life .
- So he has got to do academic classes .
- Sometimes people does Jojo's homework to help him and also because he's an athlete.
- For athlete , people are coach and teachers because of his sportive statut .
- It means that Sport is more important than academic classes for this kind of persons .
- Finally sometimes universities change the students.
- We studied a text where is to detail the chronology of a student and the reaction of his close relations.
- In 16 months, he wanted to change orientation.
- His clothing style had change as well as his attitude.
- About his parents they remark that he became open minded , an became more mature .
- Thus, university is very renowned in United States but it's not really advantageous to the students who have to pay off their students debts during several years.
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