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My new friend
Hello everyone once again !
- I started my studies in a cadena four days ago .
- In this academy I knew a beautiful girl called Maria , she's Venezuelan and she is sixteen .
- I don't know why a think about her all time , I hope a day we will be best friends . Wish me luck !

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- My new friend
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câu 1
- Hello everyone once again !
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câu 2
- I started my studies in a cadena four days ago .
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I started my ~~studies in a c~~education /training in Cadena four days ago .
  Ichos Comments 1
  
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- In this academy I knew a beautiful girl called Maria , she's Venezuelan and she is sixteen .
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- In this academy I ~~knew a~~puck up with beautiful girl who called Maria , she's Venezuelan and she is sixteen .
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- In this academy I ~~knew~~came to know about a beautiful girl called Maria ~~, s~~.She's Venezuelan and she is sixteen .
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- I don't know why a think about her all time , I hope a day we will be best friends . Wish me luck !
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- I don't know why aI thinking about her all t~~ime , I hope a~~he time, but I hope that one day we will be best friends . Wish me luck !
  Ichos Comments
  
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- I don't know why aI think about her all the time ,. I hope athat one day we will be best friends . Wish me luck !
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