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從victorkenny來的文本 - English

  • My new friend

  • Hello everyone once again !
    • I started my studies in a cadena four days ago .
    • In this academy I knew a beautiful girl called Maria , she's Venezuelan and she is sixteen .
    • I don't know why a think about her all time , I hope a day we will be best friends . Wish me luck !

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