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    • More and more Americans are questioning things, becoming more aware of their governors’ corruption and denouncing it.
    • Nevertheless, they are still few people and in general the main current of thought believes fervently in the American Exceptionalism.
    • As all Empires do, the US will eventually collapse, in short-term probably not because its citizens rebel against their oppressors, but because the instability of the system.
    • When the system fell, the fraud will be evident and the people will rebel; it may fall economically because of the bank’s speculation, or it may fall because a war: banks cannot keep creating money out of nothing and indebting people endlessly nor can The Unites States keep bombing the Middle East without creating more hatred and terrorism against them.
    • In the best of the cases, people will rebel and change the system to better before any huge tragedy happens.
    • On the contrary, the empire will fall and another maybe worst, will take its place and in that case, may God have mercy on our souls.

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    • As all Empires do, the US will eventually collapse, in short-term probably not because its citizens rebel against their oppressors, but because the instability of the system.
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    • As all Eempires do, the US will eventually collapse, --in the short- term probably not because its citizens rebel against their oppressors, but because of the instability of the system.
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    • When the system fell, the fraud will be evident and the people will rebel; it may fall economically because of the bank’s speculation, or it may fall because a war: banks cannot keep creating money out of nothing and indebting people endlessly nor can The Unites States keep bombing the Middle East without creating more hatred and terrorism against them.
      Balsuok dabar!
    • When the system fealls, the fraud will be evident and the people will rebel; i. It may fall economically because of the bank’s speculation, or it may fall because of a war: banks cannot keep creating money out of nothing and indebting people endlessly, nor can The Unitesd States keep bombing the Middle East without creating more hatred and terrorism against them.
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