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    • More and more Americans are questioning things, becoming more aware of their governors’ corruption and denouncing it.
    • Nevertheless, they are still few people and in general the main current of thought believes fervently in the American Exceptionalism.
    • As all Empires do, the US will eventually collapse, in short-term probably not because its citizens rebel against their oppressors, but because the instability of the system.
    • When the system fell, the fraud will be evident and the people will rebel; it may fall economically because of the bank’s speculation, or it may fall because a war: banks cannot keep creating money out of nothing and indebting people endlessly nor can The Unites States keep bombing the Middle East without creating more hatred and terrorism against them.
    • In the best of the cases, people will rebel and change the system to better before any huge tragedy happens.
    • On the contrary, the empire will fall and another maybe worst, will take its place and in that case, may God have mercy on our souls.

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    • More and more Americans are questioning things, becoming more aware of their governors’ corruption and denouncing it.
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    • More and more Americans are questioning things, and becoming more aware of their governors’ment’s corruption and denouncing it.
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    • Nevertheless, they are still few people and in general the main current of thought believes fervently in the American Exceptionalism.
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    • Nevertheless, they are still few people and, in general, the main current of thoughtaverage citizen believes fervently in the American Exceptionalism.
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    • As all Empires do, the US will eventually collapse, in short-term probably not because its citizens rebel against their oppressors, but because the instability of the system.
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    • As all Eempires do, the US will eventually collapse, --in the short- term probably not because its citizens rebel against their oppressors, but because of the instability of the system.
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    • When the system fell, the fraud will be evident and the people will rebel; it may fall economically because of the bank’s speculation, or it may fall because a war: banks cannot keep creating money out of nothing and indebting people endlessly nor can The Unites States keep bombing the Middle East without creating more hatred and terrorism against them.
      투표하세요!
    • When the system fealls, the fraud will be evident and the people will rebel; i. It may fall economically because of the bank’s speculation, or it may fall because of a war: banks cannot keep creating money out of nothing and indebting people endlessly, nor can The Unitesd States keep bombing the Middle East without creating more hatred and terrorism against them.
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    • In the best of the cases, people will rebel and change the system to better before any huge tragedy happens.
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    • In the best of the cases, people will rebel and change the system tofor the better before any huge tragedy happens.
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    • On the contrary, the empire will fall and another maybe worst, will take its place and in that case, may God have mercy on our souls.
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    • On the contrary, the empire will fall and another maybe worst, will take its place and in that case, may God have mercy on our souls. HAHAHAHAHA, this is too funny
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    • On the contraryother hand, the empire willcould fall and another, maybe worste, will take its place and, in that case, may God have mercy on our souls. ¶
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