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متن از Wejo - English

  • Look through my composition

  • Do you think you would be happier if you suddenly became very rich?
  • How do you think your life would change?
  • Obviously, my life would change greatly if I suddenly became a zillionaire.
    • I would have a great deal of things I can't afford now -hand made clothes, cars, cotteges, and etc. I would have an opportunity to do nearly everything I want.
    • But surely there is another side of the coin.
    • Becoming richer, people often forget that in fact they are on an equality with others.
    • Money are money, they empower us to make our dreams come true.
    • The only reason why we need money-thanks to it we can buy food, clothes, in other words, they help us satisfy our bare necessities.
  • Love, friendship, good health, people's respect cannot be bought with money.
  • Apart from that being rich can really make your life miserable. Why?
  • You will get fretful and the only thing you will get on your brain is money.
  • You will think about how to keep your money and save it while other people will think about how to have a nice New Year celebration and where to go on holidays.
  • You will not able to think about holidays!
    • Wnen there is nobody at your apartment, robbers can get into your apartment and steal money.
  • You can say that it's possible to keep money in a bank but it goes without saying when you have big sum of money you think only about it.
    • In conclusion ,I need to note that big money let people do their thing but it can cause not being in harmony with themselves.

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