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متن از lewauke - English

  • School event

    • Last week in central park, taked place school event, mostly organised by astronomy club, baking club, drama society, fitness club and science club.
    • Astronomy and science clubs showed experiments, baking club treat guests, fitness club performed many exercise and in the evening, drama club showed spectacle.
    • In my opinion it was very succesfull happening.
    • Guests were satisfated.
    • I spent time very well.
  • Everyone was happy.
    • But I think it would be outlast and more clubs should take a part on it.
    • If anyone have photos, please sent them to the school mail.
    • It would be helpful in making school chronicle and will be pleasant memory. Prethanks!

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