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    • Hello, Can you please help and correct this text: Sky is close, my first fly on paraglide I was always afraid of high (mean to be high above earth), but I want also to jump with parachute.
    • And finaly last summer I was ready (I have a desicion to jump finaly), but after last time I stop smoking I have 20kg more weight and was not good by weight, witch maximum was 80 or 90kg, but I was weighted 112kg) Insted to fly on paraglider it is maximum weight 120kg, so I finnaly made my dream come true.
    • Ok, almost made, but I will jump with parachute for sure when I was lose weight.
  • Here is original in russian, if you know russian: Я всегда боялся высоты и при этом давно хотел спрыгнуть с парашютом:) И вот прошлым летом наконец решился, но когда бросал курить набрал 20 кг и не подходил по весу, 80 или 90кг ограничение на прыжок с инструктором, а я весил 112.
  • Зато при полете на параплане ограничение было 120кг и я наконец осуществил свою мечту:) Ладно, почти осуществил, но с парашютом я все равно прыгну, когда похудею:) And here is link to this video on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_7HcvpgQMA

لطفا کمک کنید تا هر جمله تصحیح شود - English

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  • جمله 1
    • Hello, Can you please help and correct this text: Sky is close, my first fly on paraglide I was always afraid of high (mean to be high above earth), but I want also to jump with parachute.
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    • Hello, Can you please help and correct this text:¶Sky is close, my first fly on paraglide¶I was always afraid of height, (mean to be high above earth), but I want alsoalso want to jump with parachute.
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      رای دهید!
    • یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 1یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 1
  • جمله 2
    • And finaly last summer I was ready (I have a desicion to jump finaly), but after last time I stop smoking I have 20kg more weight and was not good by weight, witch maximum was 80 or 90kg, but I was weighted 112kg) Insted to fly on paraglider it is maximum weight 120kg, so I finnaly made my dream come true.
      رای دهید!
    • And finally last summer, I was ready (I have a desiccision to jump finally), but after last time I stopped smoking, I have 20kg more weight and was not good by weight, witchgained 20kg, and was not happy with the weight gain. The maximum was 80 or 90kg, but I was weighted 112kg) Insted t. To fly on paraglider, it is maximum weightrequired of 120kg, so I finnaly made my dream come true.
      EljoriaEljoria profile picture نظرات 1
      رای دهید!
    • یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 2یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 2
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  • جمله 4
    • Here is original in russian, if you know russian: Я всегда боялся высоты и при этом давно хотел спрыгнуть с парашютом:) И вот прошлым летом наконец решился, но когда бросал курить набрал 20 кг и не подходил по весу, 80 или 90кг ограничение на прыжок с инструктором, а я весил 112.
      رای دهید!
    • یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 4یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 4
  • جمله 5
    • Зато при полете на параплане ограничение было 120кг и я наконец осуществил свою мечту:) Ладно, почти осуществил, но с парашютом я все равно прыгну, когда похудею:) And here is link to this video on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7_7HcvpgQMA
      رای دهید!
    • یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 5یک تصحیح جدید اضافه کنید - جمله 5