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Teks daripada Brocky - English

  • Pets should be treated like family members

    • Animals have an impact on the life of human being, there are two kind of animals, the one who lives in the wild, and the one that lives with the human being.
    • The latter one some people prefer to treat them nicely and consider them as a part of a family and treat them like family members, others prefer not treating them as family members.
  • In my opinion, pets should be treated like family members for two reasons.
    • The first reason is because playing with them is more fun, due to the fact that pets live with us in the same house, and they're most of the time close to us.
  • It's not fair to mistreat them just because they're animals, and not taking advantage of playing with them and walking them outside the house time to time.
    • For example, when I was 7 years old, I lived with my parents in a small town, I didnt have too much friends due to the majority of people are adult or old.
    • I had a dog, I used to take him outside with me walking together and playing with him, I enjoyed most of my time with him, especially when I feel lonely.
    • The only one who never abandoned me was my little dog, who used to try each time to play with me and make me laugh and enjoy my time that I spent with him.
  • Which helped me a lot psychologically to relax and overcome that lack of friendship that I had.
    • As you can see, pets are very important by helping lonley people to carry on their lives without being left alone and abandoned by other people.
    • The second reason is that most of the pets are helpfull in protecting the family from threats that may come from outside.
    • For instance, I remember when I moved with my parents to different area where I live, everything was strange to me, and time to time I pass through people who are being rude and trying to provoke me, untill once three of them came behind me when I was taking my dog outise and walking with him, they tried to tease me and steal my money.
    • I was helpless and couldnt defend myself before these gang's group.
    • And all of the sudden my dog jumped on the person on my right and throwed him down, and turend to the one who was hold me from the back and bite him in his leg.
    • While the third guy run immediately after what he saw what happened to his two fellow.
  • As you can see, pets are very helpful to their owners.
  • In sum, having a pet is vital thing especially in our time that we live in.
    • Some of the people argue that pets should be left outside the house and not treat them as family members.
    • I believe that pets should be treated as a family members not just because being with them is more fun but also they're very helpful especially when danger threats a family member.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

  • Title
  • Ayat 1
    • Animals have an impact on the life of human being, there are two kind of animals, the one who lives in the wild, and the one that lives with the human being.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Animals have an impact on the life of human beings, there are two kind of animals, the one who lives in the wild, and the one that lives with the human beings.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
    • The latter one some people prefer to treat them nicely and consider them as a part of a family and treat them like family members, others prefer not treating them as family members.
      Undi sekarang!
    • The latter one sSome people prefer the latter, to treat them nicely and consider them as a part of atheir family and treat them like family members, others prefer not treating them as family members.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • The first reason is because playing with them is more fun, due to the fact that pets live with us in the same house, and they're most of the time close to us.
      Undi sekarang!
    • The first reason is because playing with them is morea lot of fun, due to the fact that pets live with us in the same house, and they're the closest to us most of the time close to us.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
    • It's not fair to mistreat them just because they're animals, and not taking advantage of playing with them and walking them outside the house time to time.
      Undi sekarang!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
    • For example, when I was 7 years old, I lived with my parents in a small town, I didnt have too much friends due to the majority of people are adult or old.
      Undi sekarang!
    • For example, when I was 7 years old, I lived with my parents in a small town,. I didnt have too muchany friends due to the fact that the majority of people awere either adults or old.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • I had a dog, I used to take him outside with me walking together and playing with him, I enjoyed most of my time with him, especially when I feel lonely.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I had a dog,. I used to take him outside with me walking together and playing with him,. I enjoyed most of my time with him, especially when I feelt lonely.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • The only one who never abandoned me was my little dog, who used to try each time to play with me and make me laugh and enjoy my time that I spent with him.
      Undi sekarang!
    • The only one who never abandoned me was my little dog, who used to try each time to play with me andll the time, make me laugh and made me enjoy my time that I spent with him.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
  • Ayat 10
    • As you can see, pets are very important by helping lonley people to carry on their lives without being left alone and abandoned by other people.
      Undi sekarang!
    • As you can see, pets are very important by helping lonlely people to carry on their lives without being left alone and abandoned by other people.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10
  • Ayat 11
    • The second reason is that most of the pets are helpfull in protecting the family from threats that may come from outside.
      Undi sekarang!
    • The second reason is that most of the pets are helpfull in protecting their family from threats that may come from outside.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 11
  • Ayat 12
    • For instance, I remember when I moved with my parents to different area where I live, everything was strange to me, and time to time I pass through people who are being rude and trying to provoke me, untill once three of them came behind me when I was taking my dog outise and walking with him, they tried to tease me and steal my money.
      Undi sekarang!
    • For instance, I remember when I moved with my parents to different area where I live, eto a different area with my parents. Everything was strange to me, and time to time I passed through people who awere being rude and trying to provoke me, untill once time three of them came up behind me when I was taking my dog outise and walking with him, tside. They tried to tease me and steal my money.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 12TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 12
  • Ayat 13
  • Ayat 14
    • And all of the sudden my dog jumped on the person on my right and throwed him down, and turend to the one who was hold me from the back and bite him in his leg.
      Undi sekarang!
    • And all of thea sudden my dog jumped on the person on my right and throwedew him down, and turened around to the one who was holding me from the back and bite him in his leg.
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 14
  • Ayat 15
  • Ayat 16
  • Ayat 17
  • Ayat 18
  • Ayat 19
    • I believe that pets should be treated as a family members not just because being with them is more fun but also they're very helpful especially when danger threats a family member.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I believe that pets should be treated as a family members, not just because being with them is more fun, but also because they're very helpful e. Especially when danger threats a family member. ¶
      100% GOOD (1 votes)
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 19TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 19