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    • MY CV in ENglish, please help to correct ! Thanks

    • Dear miss, dear sir, I have a master's in communication obtained in a school of graphic design and visual communication, I developed my taste for pictures/images ( ?) and I started to work in large ( ?) groups such as Euro RSCG, BBDO where I worked as a art Director, which allowed me to make my weapons (to have expérience ?)on substantial issues and global brands and be comfortable on all communication media: radio, web and print and video.
  • Thanks to my passion for creating and my knowledge of the Adobe suite software, I am able to develop and provide full supervision of an advertising campaign: from research to concept (single or team) to the accompaniment of production teams, through the realization of the models.
  • Today I have the desire to integrate your business/ Factory ? to work as a graphic designer / art director to express my creativity because it which that best fits ( ?)my professional expectations.
  • I decided to try my luck and apply to New York for several reasons: I went there and I loved the vibrant, positive and dynamic atmosphere of the city, the warmth and friendliness of its people.
  • I travel regularly and I've never had as well and welcomed in a city.
    • I felt at home, probably also because I have family there.
  • I am able to come up with a work visa that is easily obtained through a partnership France / America.
    • I am very motivated, versatile and I also have a very good adaptability, which allowed me to work in small design studios and large advertising agencies.
  • I also have a strong sense of contact and some momentum, which also make me a main contact for partners.
    • I desire to bring you my own value, my serious and everything that makes me zealous and responsible person.
    • The prospect of working with you brings me to seek a telephone interview or video to present my portfolio and consider how my energy and my ability and my creativity could marry you.
  • Pending meeting with you, please accept, Madam, Sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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    • Dear miss, dear sir, I have a master's in communication obtained in a school of graphic design and visual communication, I developed my taste for pictures/images ( ?) and I started to work in large ( ?) groups such as Euro RSCG, BBDO where I worked as a art Director, which allowed me to make my weapons (to have expérience ?)on substantial issues and global brands and be comfortable on all communication media: radio, web and print and video.
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    • Dear miss, dear and sir,¶¶I have a mMaster's in communication obtained infrom a school of graphic design and visual communication, I.I have developed my taste for pictures/images ( ?) and I started to work in large ( ?) groups such as Euro RSCG, BBDO where I worked as an art Director, which allowed me to make my weapons (to have expérience ?).I have gained experiences via this exposure on substantial issues and global brands and beis comfortable oin all communication media: radio, web and ,print and video.
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    • Dear miss, dear sirSir/Madam,¶¶I have a master's in communication obtained infrom a school of graphic design and visual communication,. I developed my taste for pictures/images ( ?) and I started to work inat large ( ?) groupsstudios(?) such as Euro RSCG, BBDO where I worked as a an Art Director, which allowed me to make my weapons (to havegain expéerience ?)on substantialof a range of issues(?) and global brands, and become comfortable on all communicationwith a range of media: radio, web and, print and video.
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 1VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 1
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    • Thanks to my passion for creating and my knowledge of the Adobe suite software, I am able to develop and provide full supervision of an advertising campaign: from research to concept (single or team) to the accompaniment of production teams, through the realization of the models.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 2VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 2
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    • Today I have the desire to integrate your business/ Factory ? to work as a graphic designer / art director to express my creativity because it which that best fits ( ?)my professional expectations.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 3
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    • I decided to try my luck and apply to New York for several reasons: I went there and I loved the vibrant, positive and dynamic atmosphere of the city, the warmth and friendliness of its people.
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 4
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    • I am very motivated, versatile and I also have a very good adaptability, which allowed me to work in small design studios and large advertising agencies.
      Stem nou!
    • I am very motivated, versatile and I also have a very good adaptability, which alloweds me to work in small design studios and large advertising agencies.
      seantsy2seantsy2 profile picture Opmerkings
      Stem nou!
    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 8VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 8
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    • The prospect of working with you brings me to seek a telephone interview or video to present my portfolio and consider how my energy and my ability and my creativity could marry you.
      Stem nou!
    • The prospect of working with you brings me to seekprovides me an opportunity to request for a telephone interview or video to present you my portfolio and ,consider howing the intense of my energy and my ability and my creativitywhich could marrytch your expectations.
      seantsy2seantsy2 profile picture Opmerkings
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    • VOEG ’n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 11VOEG 'n NUWE KORREKSIE BY! - Sentence 11
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