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    • MY CV in ENglish, please help to correct ! Thanks

    • Dear miss, dear sir, I have a master's in communication obtained in a school of graphic design and visual communication, I developed my taste for pictures/images ( ?) and I started to work in large ( ?) groups such as Euro RSCG, BBDO where I worked as a art Director, which allowed me to make my weapons (to have expérience ?)on substantial issues and global brands and be comfortable on all communication media: radio, web and print and video.
  • Thanks to my passion for creating and my knowledge of the Adobe suite software, I am able to develop and provide full supervision of an advertising campaign: from research to concept (single or team) to the accompaniment of production teams, through the realization of the models.
  • Today I have the desire to integrate your business/ Factory ? to work as a graphic designer / art director to express my creativity because it which that best fits ( ?)my professional expectations.
  • I decided to try my luck and apply to New York for several reasons: I went there and I loved the vibrant, positive and dynamic atmosphere of the city, the warmth and friendliness of its people.
  • I travel regularly and I've never had as well and welcomed in a city.
    • I felt at home, probably also because I have family there.
  • I am able to come up with a work visa that is easily obtained through a partnership France / America.
    • I am very motivated, versatile and I also have a very good adaptability, which allowed me to work in small design studios and large advertising agencies.
  • I also have a strong sense of contact and some momentum, which also make me a main contact for partners.
    • I desire to bring you my own value, my serious and everything that makes me zealous and responsible person.
    • The prospect of working with you brings me to seek a telephone interview or video to present my portfolio and consider how my energy and my ability and my creativity could marry you.
  • Pending meeting with you, please accept, Madam, Sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.

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    • Dear miss, dear sir, I have a master's in communication obtained in a school of graphic design and visual communication, I developed my taste for pictures/images ( ?) and I started to work in large ( ?) groups such as Euro RSCG, BBDO where I worked as a art Director, which allowed me to make my weapons (to have expérience ?)on substantial issues and global brands and be comfortable on all communication media: radio, web and print and video.
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    • Dear miss, dear and sir,¶¶I have a mMaster's in communication obtained infrom a school of graphic design and visual communication, I.I have developed my taste for pictures/images ( ?) and I started to work in large ( ?) groups such as Euro RSCG, BBDO where I worked as an art Director, which allowed me to make my weapons (to have expérience ?).I have gained experiences via this exposure on substantial issues and global brands and beis comfortable oin all communication media: radio, web and ,print and video.
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    • Dear miss, dear sirSir/Madam,¶¶I have a master's in communication obtained infrom a school of graphic design and visual communication,. I developed my taste for pictures/images ( ?) and I started to work inat large ( ?) groupsstudios(?) such as Euro RSCG, BBDO where I worked as a an Art Director, which allowed me to make my weapons (to havegain expéerience ?)on substantialof a range of issues(?) and global brands, and become comfortable on all communicationwith a range of media: radio, web and, print and video.
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    • Thanks to my passion for creating and my knowledge of the Adobe suite software, I am able to develop and provide full supervision of an advertising campaign: from research to concept (single or team) to the accompaniment of production teams, through the realization of the models.
      赶紧投票吧！
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    • Today I have the desire to integrate your business/ Factory ? to work as a graphic designer / art director to express my creativity because it which that best fits ( ?)my professional expectations.
      赶紧投票吧！
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    • I decided to try my luck and apply to New York for several reasons: I went there and I loved the vibrant, positive and dynamic atmosphere of the city, the warmth and friendliness of its people.
      赶紧投票吧！
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    • I am very motivated, versatile and I also have a very good adaptability, which allowed me to work in small design studios and large advertising agencies.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • I am very motivated, versatile and I also have a very good adaptability, which alloweds me to work in small design studios and large advertising agencies.
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      赶紧投票吧！
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    • The prospect of working with you brings me to seek a telephone interview or video to present my portfolio and consider how my energy and my ability and my creativity could marry you.
      赶紧投票吧！
    • The prospect of working with you brings me to seekprovides me an opportunity to request for a telephone interview or video to present you my portfolio and ,consider howing the intense of my energy and my ability and my creativitywhich could marrytch your expectations.
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      赶紧投票吧！
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