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    • MY CV in ENglish, please help to correct ! Thanks

    • Dear miss, dear sir, I have a master's in communication obtained in a school of graphic design and visual communication, I developed my taste for pictures/images ( ?) and I started to work in large ( ?) groups such as Euro RSCG, BBDO where I worked as a art Director, which allowed me to make my weapons (to have expérience ?)on substantial issues and global brands and be comfortable on all communication media: radio, web and print and video.
  • Thanks to my passion for creating and my knowledge of the Adobe suite software, I am able to develop and provide full supervision of an advertising campaign: from research to concept (single or team) to the accompaniment of production teams, through the realization of the models.
  • Today I have the desire to integrate your business/ Factory ? to work as a graphic designer / art director to express my creativity because it which that best fits ( ?)my professional expectations.
  • I decided to try my luck and apply to New York for several reasons: I went there and I loved the vibrant, positive and dynamic atmosphere of the city, the warmth and friendliness of its people.
  • I travel regularly and I've never had as well and welcomed in a city.
    • I felt at home, probably also because I have family there.
  • I am able to come up with a work visa that is easily obtained through a partnership France / America.
    • I am very motivated, versatile and I also have a very good adaptability, which allowed me to work in small design studios and large advertising agencies.
  • I also have a strong sense of contact and some momentum, which also make me a main contact for partners.
    • I desire to bring you my own value, my serious and everything that makes me zealous and responsible person.
    • The prospect of working with you brings me to seek a telephone interview or video to present my portfolio and consider how my energy and my ability and my creativity could marry you.
  • Pending meeting with you, please accept, Madam, Sir, the assurances of my highest consideration.

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