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    • June 29th.

  • Today is Sunday, June 29th.
    • Today I should clean the glasses cup, because, tonight come my aunt, but, I didn't, because I don't want that she will coming.
    • Now, I'm sit on the sofa by my kitten in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down in summer come through the window and I feel so hot that don't like that feeling.
    • When I returned home, I should order the closet, because I came with the my clothes with I've wore in Medellin.
    • I learn many things, see many things, but I can't live without my mommy and my girlfriend.
    • Now, somebody is wait for me in the kitchen, she is saying: "princess, coming and eat gelatin and cookie", I want, I want, but I must listening the class of calculus, but it's in portuguese, and I understand but when I finish to watch the video, I talk very very rare.
    • My mommy is in the dining room, with my friends, today we cooked a BBQ, my friends, my cousins, my sister and brother, my daddy.
  • Later, I'm going to the basement, because I think some friends are in it, and I believe know that are doing.
  • I almost cried when I see the wall by the stairs because, I see all pictures, the photos, of my brothers and myself, I feel so sad because the time pass and my family are breaking, well, breaking not, if not, all is living in others cities, I live in Medellin, my sister in LA, my brother here (Bogota), but they are thinking move home, and city.
  • well, I think that I'm going to lie down on the rug and see the penalties in the match. bye bye

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    • Today I should clean the glasses cup, because, tonight come my aunt, but, I didn't, because I don't want that she will coming.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Today I should clean the glasses cup, because, tonight come my aunt, but, I didn't it, because I don't want that she will cominges.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture Comments
    • Today I should clean the glasses cups, because, tonight come my aunt will come, but, I didn't, because I don't want that she willher to cominge.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • Now, I'm sit on the sofa by my kitten in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down in summer come through the window and I feel so hot that don't like that feeling.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Now, I'm sitting on the sofa by my kittchen in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down in summer come through the window and I feel so hot that don't like that feeling.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture Comments
    • Now, I'm sit on the sofa by my kitten in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down inwhere the summer sun comes through the window and I, making me feel so hot that. I don't like that feeling.
      Misslucky832Misslucky832 profile picture Comments
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
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  • câu 6
    • Now, somebody is wait for me in the kitchen, she is saying: "princess, coming and eat gelatin and cookie", I want, I want, but I must listening the class of calculus, but it's in portuguese, and I understand but when I finish to watch the video, I talk very very rare.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Now, somebody is wait for me in the kitchen, she is saying: "princess, cominge and eat gelatin and cookies", I want, I want, but I must listening the class of calculus, but it's in portuguese, and I understand but when I finish to watch the video, I talk very very rare.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture Comments
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • My mommy is in the dining room, with my friends, today we cooked a BBQ, my friends, my cousins, my sister and brother, my daddy.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • My mommy is in the dining room, with my friends, today we cooked a BBQ, my friends, my cousins, my sister and, my brother, and my daddy.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture Comments
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • Later, I'm going to the basement, because I think some friends are in it, and I believe know that are doing.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
  • câu 9
    • I almost cried when I see the wall by the stairs because, I see all pictures, the photos, of my brothers and myself, I feel so sad because the time pass and my family are breaking, well, breaking not, if not, all is living in others cities, I live in Medellin, my sister in LA, my brother here (Bogota), but they are thinking move home, and city.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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