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Text from vaness182 - English

    • June 29th.

  • Today is Sunday, June 29th.
    • Today I should clean the glasses cup, because, tonight come my aunt, but, I didn't, because I don't want that she will coming.
    • Now, I'm sit on the sofa by my kitten in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down in summer come through the window and I feel so hot that don't like that feeling.
    • When I returned home, I should order the closet, because I came with the my clothes with I've wore in Medellin.
    • I learn many things, see many things, but I can't live without my mommy and my girlfriend.
    • Now, somebody is wait for me in the kitchen, she is saying: "princess, coming and eat gelatin and cookie", I want, I want, but I must listening the class of calculus, but it's in portuguese, and I understand but when I finish to watch the video, I talk very very rare.
    • My mommy is in the dining room, with my friends, today we cooked a BBQ, my friends, my cousins, my sister and brother, my daddy.
  • Later, I'm going to the basement, because I think some friends are in it, and I believe know that are doing.
  • I almost cried when I see the wall by the stairs because, I see all pictures, the photos, of my brothers and myself, I feel so sad because the time pass and my family are breaking, well, breaking not, if not, all is living in others cities, I live in Medellin, my sister in LA, my brother here (Bogota), but they are thinking move home, and city.
  • well, I think that I'm going to lie down on the rug and see the penalties in the match. bye bye

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Frazo 1
  • Frazo 2
    • Today I should clean the glasses cup, because, tonight come my aunt, but, I didn't, because I don't want that she will coming.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Today I should clean the glasses cup, because, tonight come my aunt, but, I didn't it, because I don't want that she will cominges.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture Comments
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Today I should clean the glasses cups, because, tonight come my aunt will come, but, I didn't, because I don't want that she willher to cominge.
      CallirrhoeCallirrhoe profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 2
  • Frazo 3
    • Now, I'm sit on the sofa by my kitten in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down in summer come through the window and I feel so hot that don't like that feeling.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Now, I'm sitting on the sofa by my kittchen in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down in summer come through the window and I feel so hot that don't like that feeling.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture Comments
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Now, I'm sit on the sofa by my kitten in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down inwhere the summer sun comes through the window and I, making me feel so hot that. I don't like that feeling.
      Misslucky832Misslucky832 profile picture Comments
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 3
  • Frazo 4
  • Frazo 5
  • Frazo 6
    • Now, somebody is wait for me in the kitchen, she is saying: "princess, coming and eat gelatin and cookie", I want, I want, but I must listening the class of calculus, but it's in portuguese, and I understand but when I finish to watch the video, I talk very very rare.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • Now, somebody is wait for me in the kitchen, she is saying: "princess, cominge and eat gelatin and cookies", I want, I want, but I must listening the class of calculus, but it's in portuguese, and I understand but when I finish to watch the video, I talk very very rare.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture Comments
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 6
  • Frazo 7
    • My mommy is in the dining room, with my friends, today we cooked a BBQ, my friends, my cousins, my sister and brother, my daddy.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • My mommy is in the dining room, with my friends, today we cooked a BBQ, my friends, my cousins, my sister and, my brother, and my daddy.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture Comments
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 7
  • Frazo 8
  • Frazo 9
    • I almost cried when I see the wall by the stairs because, I see all pictures, the photos, of my brothers and myself, I feel so sad because the time pass and my family are breaking, well, breaking not, if not, all is living in others cities, I live in Medellin, my sister in LA, my brother here (Bogota), but they are thinking move home, and city.
      Voĉdoni nun!
    • ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 9
  • Frazo 10