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    • June 29th.

  • Today is Sunday, June 29th.
    • Today I should clean the glasses cup, because, tonight come my aunt, but, I didn't, because I don't want that she will coming.
    • Now, I'm sit on the sofa by my kitten in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down in summer come through the window and I feel so hot that don't like that feeling.
    • When I returned home, I should order the closet, because I came with the my clothes with I've wore in Medellin.
    • I learn many things, see many things, but I can't live without my mommy and my girlfriend.
    • Now, somebody is wait for me in the kitchen, she is saying: "princess, coming and eat gelatin and cookie", I want, I want, but I must listening the class of calculus, but it's in portuguese, and I understand but when I finish to watch the video, I talk very very rare.
    • My mommy is in the dining room, with my friends, today we cooked a BBQ, my friends, my cousins, my sister and brother, my daddy.
  • Later, I'm going to the basement, because I think some friends are in it, and I believe know that are doing.
  • I almost cried when I see the wall by the stairs because, I see all pictures, the photos, of my brothers and myself, I feel so sad because the time pass and my family are breaking, well, breaking not, if not, all is living in others cities, I live in Medellin, my sister in LA, my brother here (Bogota), but they are thinking move home, and city.
  • well, I think that I'm going to lie down on the rug and see the penalties in the match. bye bye

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    • Today I should clean the glasses cup, because, tonight come my aunt, but, I didn't, because I don't want that she will coming.
      투표하세요!
    • Today I should clean the glasses cup, because, tonight come my aunt, but, I didn't it, because I don't want that she will cominges.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture 댓글
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    • Today I should clean the glasses cups, because, tonight come my aunt will come, but, I didn't, because I don't want that she willher to cominge.
      CallirrhoeCallirrhoe profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • Now, I'm sit on the sofa by my kitten in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down in summer come through the window and I feel so hot that don't like that feeling.
      투표하세요!
    • Now, I'm sitting on the sofa by my kittchen in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down in summer come through the window and I feel so hot that don't like that feeling.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture 댓글
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
    • Now, I'm sit on the sofa by my kitten in the living room, because, my bedroom is in the south of my apartment and the sun down inwhere the summer sun comes through the window and I, making me feel so hot that. I don't like that feeling.
      Misslucky832Misslucky832 profile picture 댓글
      투표하세요!
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    • When I returned home, I should order the closet, because I came with the my clothes with I've wore in Medellin.
      투표하세요!
    • When I returned home, I should order the closet, because I came with the my clothes with, I've wore in Medellin.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture 댓글
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    • I learn many things, see many things, but I can't live without my mommy and my girlfriend.
      투표하세요!
    • I learn many things, see many things, but I can't live without my mommy and my girlfriend. do you have girlfriend or boyfriend?
      RoysherRoysher profile picture 댓글
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    • Now, somebody is wait for me in the kitchen, she is saying: "princess, coming and eat gelatin and cookie", I want, I want, but I must listening the class of calculus, but it's in portuguese, and I understand but when I finish to watch the video, I talk very very rare.
      투표하세요!
    • Now, somebody is wait for me in the kitchen, she is saying: "princess, cominge and eat gelatin and cookies", I want, I want, but I must listening the class of calculus, but it's in portuguese, and I understand but when I finish to watch the video, I talk very very rare.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture 댓글
      0% GOOD (1 votes)
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    • My mommy is in the dining room, with my friends, today we cooked a BBQ, my friends, my cousins, my sister and brother, my daddy.
      투표하세요!
    • My mommy is in the dining room, with my friends, today we cooked a BBQ, my friends, my cousins, my sister and, my brother, and my daddy.
      RoysherRoysher profile picture 댓글
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    • I almost cried when I see the wall by the stairs because, I see all pictures, the photos, of my brothers and myself, I feel so sad because the time pass and my family are breaking, well, breaking not, if not, all is living in others cities, I live in Medellin, my sister in LA, my brother here (Bogota), but they are thinking move home, and city.
      투표하세요!
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