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- I need help
Hi everybody! I need help.
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with those people, whose native language is English.
- But is is better and not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!

Nemo4kaJune 2014100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- I need help
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- I need help !
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câu 1
- Hi everybody! I need help.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 2
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with those people, whose native language is English.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with ~~those~~ people, whose native language is English.
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- I need to practise English and ~~it is desirabl~~I would like to get in touch with ~~those~~ people, whose native language is English.
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câu 3
- But is is better and not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ~~But is~~It is better ~~and~~but not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!
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