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Мәтін алынған ... - English

- I need help
Hi everybody! I need help.
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with those people, whose native language is English.
- But is is better and not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!

Тақырыбы
- I need help
  Қазір дауыс бер!
- I need help !
  JSHINE Пікірі
  
  Спам деп хабарлау керек па?
- Жаңа түзету қосу - Тақырыбы
Сөйлем 1
- Hi everybody! I need help.
  Қазір дауыс бер!
- Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 1
Сөйлем 2
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with those people, whose native language is English.
  Қазір дауыс бер!
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with ~~those~~ people, whose native language is English.
  MissRuth Пікірі
  
  Спам деп хабарлау керек па?
- I need to practise English and ~~it is desirabl~~I would like to get in touch with ~~those~~ people, whose native language is English.
  JSHINE Пікірі
  
  Спам деп хабарлау керек па?
- Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 2
Сөйлем 3
- But is is better and not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!
  Қазір дауыс бер!
- ~~But is~~It is better ~~and~~but not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!
  MissRuth Пікірі
  
  Спам деп хабарлау керек па?
- Жаңа түзету қосу - Сөйлем 3