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- I need help
Hi everybody! I need help.
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with those people, whose native language is English.
- But is is better and not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!

Judul
- I need help
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- I need help !
  JSHINE Komentar
  
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- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- Hi everybody! I need help.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with those people, whose native language is English.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- I need to practise English and it is desirable to get in touch with ~~those~~ people, whose native language is English.
  MissRuth Komentar
  
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  100% GOOD (2 votes)
- I need to practise English and ~~it is desirabl~~I would like to get in touch with ~~those~~ people, whose native language is English.
  JSHINE Komentar
  
  Laporkan sebagai spam?
  
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- But is is better and not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- ~~But is~~It is better ~~and~~but not necessarily, may be somebody else will help me to practice English. Thanks a lot!
  MissRuth Komentar
  
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  100% GOOD (1 votes)
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3