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Văn bản từ Hendrik97 - English

- To my person
- Hello, I am Hendrik and 16 years old.
- I go to the secondary school and I am here, because I want to improve my english knowledge.
- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
My personal characteristics: I am friendly, honest and sometimes a bit serious.

Tiêu đề
- To my person
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ~~To my person~~Introduction/ About me/ To everyone out there/ Hello everyone!/ An invitation to speak
  Skyelight Comments 1
  
  Report as spam?
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Tiêu đề
câu 1
- Hello, I am Hendrik and 16 years old.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- Hello, I am Hendrik and am 16 years old.
  genzaimu Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
câu 2
- I go to the secondary school and I am here, because I want to improve my english knowledge.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I ~~go to the~~attend secondary school and~~¶I am~~ visit here, because I want to improve my eEnglish knowledge.
  genzaimu Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- I go to ~~the~~/ I attend secondary school and~~¶I am here,~~ visit this website because I want to improve my eEnglish/ my knowledge of English.
  Skyelight Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
câu 3
- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
  genzaimu Comments
  
  Report as spam?
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
câu 4
- My personal characteristics: I am friendly, honest and sometimes a bit serious.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4