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- To my person
- Hello, I am Hendrik and 16 years old.
- I go to the secondary school and I am here, because I want to improve my english knowledge.
- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
My personal characteristics: I am friendly, honest and sometimes a bit serious.

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- To my person
  Undi sekarang!
- ~~To my person~~Introduction/ About me/ To everyone out there/ Hello everyone!/ An invitation to speak
  Skyelight Ulasan 1
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hello, I am Hendrik and 16 years old.
  Undi sekarang!
- Hello, I am Hendrik and am 16 years old.
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I go to the secondary school and I am here, because I want to improve my english knowledge.
  Undi sekarang!
- I ~~go to the~~attend secondary school and~~¶I am~~ visit here, because I want to improve my eEnglish knowledge.
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
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- I go to ~~the~~/ I attend secondary school and~~¶I am here,~~ visit this website because I want to improve my eEnglish/ my knowledge of English.
  Skyelight Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
  Undi sekarang!
- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
  genzaimu Ulasan
  
  Report as spam?
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- My personal characteristics: I am friendly, honest and sometimes a bit serious.
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4