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- To my person
- Hello, I am Hendrik and 16 years old.
- I go to the secondary school and I am here, because I want to improve my english knowledge.
- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
My personal characteristics: I am friendly, honest and sometimes a bit serious.

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- To my person
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- ~~To my person~~Introduction/ About me/ To everyone out there/ Hello everyone!/ An invitation to speak
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문장 1
- Hello, I am Hendrik and 16 years old.
  투표하세요!
- Hello, I am Hendrik and am 16 years old.
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- I go to the secondary school and I am here, because I want to improve my english knowledge.
  투표하세요!
- I ~~go to the~~attend secondary school and~~¶I am~~ visit here, because I want to improve my eEnglish knowledge.
  genzaimu 댓글
  
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- I go to ~~the~~/ I attend secondary school and~~¶I am here,~~ visit this website because I want to improve my eEnglish/ my knowledge of English.
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문장 3
- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
  투표하세요!
- I hope, that we'll have fun together.
  genzaimu 댓글
  
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문장 4
- My personal characteristics: I am friendly, honest and sometimes a bit serious.
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4