Korjaukset

AUTA KORJAAMAAN NYT!korjattu

Text from Fantaudiovisivo - English

  • Travel by car (this is a homework I did)

    • Travelling by car has many advantages.
    • First of all, you can use it in anytime, anywhere and how do you want.
    • You can listen to your music alone, with the volume that you want.
    • Sometimes you can smoke a sigarette with the lowered-car-window, be cool in front of people, going slowly with the car and pumping up the stereo.
    • But however, later we have some fun with the car, it remains to pay stamp duty car, gasoline, insurance and maintenance of the car, that are certenley less if get a new car, but initialy there are more bills to pull out from your pocket.
    • If you travel a lot of, in different places, and you aren't a stressed man when you drive many hours all day for all days, easily the car is the correct choise for you.
  • But if you live in urbanized place with many way links and there are a good distribution of public transport, I prefer this one than car.
  • You don't have to pay attention at the roads, you can get relax or go on with your works, or read a book and so on.
    • If there are accidents, surely you aren't the couse, and you don't have to pay any riparations.
  • For long travel is many less stressful than travel by car qand so you don'have got any thoughts for everything behind it

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

  • Otsikko
  • Lause 1
  • Lause 2
  • Lause 3
  • Lause 4
    • Sometimes you can smoke a sigarette with the lowered-car-window, be cool in front of people, going slowly with the car and pumping up the stereo.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • Sometimes you can smoke a scigarette with the lowered-car-window,window loweredand be cool in front of people, going slowly with theby car and pumping up the stereo.
      DoreskaDoreska profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 4
  • Lause 5
    • But however, later we have some fun with the car, it remains to pay stamp duty car, gasoline, insurance and maintenance of the car, that are certenley less if get a new car, but initialy there are more bills to pull out from your pocket.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • But hHowever, laterit isn't until later that we have some fun with the car, it remains to. We must still pay stamp duty car, gasoline, insurance, and maintenance of the car, thatwhich are certeainley less ifower if you get a new car, but initialyly, there are more bills to pull out from your pocket.
      pikothemankopikothemanko profile picture Kommentit 1
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 5
  • Lause 6
    • If you travel a lot of, in different places, and you aren't a stressed man when you drive many hours all day for all days, easily the car is the correct choise for you.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • If you travel a lot of,and in different places, and you aren't a stressed man when you drive many hours all day for all days, easily the car is the correct choisce for you.
      pikothemankopikothemanko profile picture Kommentit
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 6
  • Lause 7
    • But if you live in urbanized place with many way links and there are a good distribution of public transport, I prefer this one than car.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 7
  • Lause 8
    • You don't have to pay attention at the roads, you can get relax or go on with your works, or read a book and so on.
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 8
  • Lause 9
  • Lause 10
    • For long travel is many less stressful than travel by car qand so you don'have got any thoughts for everything behind it
      Äänestä nyt!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Lause 10