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  • Travel by car (this is a homework I did)

    • Travelling by car has many advantages.
    • First of all, you can use it in anytime, anywhere and how do you want.
    • You can listen to your music alone, with the volume that you want.
    • Sometimes you can smoke a sigarette with the lowered-car-window, be cool in front of people, going slowly with the car and pumping up the stereo.
    • But however, later we have some fun with the car, it remains to pay stamp duty car, gasoline, insurance and maintenance of the car, that are certenley less if get a new car, but initialy there are more bills to pull out from your pocket.
    • If you travel a lot of, in different places, and you aren't a stressed man when you drive many hours all day for all days, easily the car is the correct choise for you.
  • But if you live in urbanized place with many way links and there are a good distribution of public transport, I prefer this one than car.
  • You don't have to pay attention at the roads, you can get relax or go on with your works, or read a book and so on.
    • If there are accidents, surely you aren't the couse, and you don't have to pay any riparations.
  • For long travel is many less stressful than travel by car qand so you don'have got any thoughts for everything behind it

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