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  • Travel by car (this is a homework I did)

    • Travelling by car has many advantages.
    • First of all, you can use it in anytime, anywhere and how do you want.
    • You can listen to your music alone, with the volume that you want.
    • Sometimes you can smoke a sigarette with the lowered-car-window, be cool in front of people, going slowly with the car and pumping up the stereo.
    • But however, later we have some fun with the car, it remains to pay stamp duty car, gasoline, insurance and maintenance of the car, that are certenley less if get a new car, but initialy there are more bills to pull out from your pocket.
    • If you travel a lot of, in different places, and you aren't a stressed man when you drive many hours all day for all days, easily the car is the correct choise for you.
  • But if you live in urbanized place with many way links and there are a good distribution of public transport, I prefer this one than car.
  • You don't have to pay attention at the roads, you can get relax or go on with your works, or read a book and so on.
    • If there are accidents, surely you aren't the couse, and you don't have to pay any riparations.
  • For long travel is many less stressful than travel by car qand so you don'have got any thoughts for everything behind it

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    • Sometimes you can smoke a sigarette with the lowered-car-window, be cool in front of people, going slowly with the car and pumping up the stereo.
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    • Sometimes you can smoke a scigarette with the lowered-car-window,window loweredand be cool in front of people, going slowly with theby car and pumping up the stereo.
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    • But however, later we have some fun with the car, it remains to pay stamp duty car, gasoline, insurance and maintenance of the car, that are certenley less if get a new car, but initialy there are more bills to pull out from your pocket.
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    • But hHowever, laterit isn't until later that we have some fun with the car, it remains to. We must still pay stamp duty car, gasoline, insurance, and maintenance of the car, thatwhich are certeainley less ifower if you get a new car, but initialyly, there are more bills to pull out from your pocket.
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    • If you travel a lot of, in different places, and you aren't a stressed man when you drive many hours all day for all days, easily the car is the correct choise for you.
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    • If you travel a lot of,and in different places, and you aren't a stressed man when you drive many hours all day for all days, easily the car is the correct choisce for you.
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    • But if you live in urbanized place with many way links and there are a good distribution of public transport, I prefer this one than car.
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    • You don't have to pay attention at the roads, you can get relax or go on with your works, or read a book and so on.
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    • For long travel is many less stressful than travel by car qand so you don'have got any thoughts for everything behind it
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