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- Hello
Hello to everyone!
- This is my first post in the polyglot community.
- I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
- I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!

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câu 1
- Hello to everyone!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
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câu 2
- This is my first post in the polyglot community.
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- This is my first post in ~~the~~ polyglot c~~ommunity~~lub.
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câu 3
- I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
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- I am an Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in the US.
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câu 4
- I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- I really hope to improve my English ~~here,~~in this club and exspecially the in writ~~ten part, thank you~~ing .Thanks for ~~the~~your attention!
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