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Teks daripada Sgorky - English

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- Hello
Hello to everyone!
- This is my first post in the polyglot community.
- I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
- I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!

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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- Hello
  Undi sekarang!
- Hello !
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Hello to everyone!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- This is my first post in the polyglot community.
  Undi sekarang!
- This is my first post in ~~the~~ polyglot c~~ommunity~~lub.
  OUSSAMAjibari Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
Ayat 3
- I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
  Undi sekarang!
- I am an Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in the US.
  OUSSAMAjibari Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 3
Ayat 4
- I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!
  Undi sekarang!
- I really hope to improve my English ~~here,~~in this club and exspecially the in writ~~ten part, thank you~~ing .Thanks for ~~the~~your attention!
  OUSSAMAjibari Ulasan
  
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4