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- Hello
Hello to everyone!
- This is my first post in the polyglot community.
- I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
- I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!

SgorkyJanuary 2014100% GOOD (1 votes)
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- Hello to everyone!
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- This is my first post in the polyglot community.
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- This is my first post in ~~the~~ polyglot c~~ommunity~~lub.
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- I am Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in US.
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- I am an Italian, but I lived for a couple of month in the US.
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- I really hope to improve my English here, expecially the written part, thank you for the attention!
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- I really hope to improve my English ~~here,~~in this club and exspecially the in writ~~ten part, thank you~~ing .Thanks for ~~the~~your attention!
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