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    • I remember one time when I was underwater, a very large killer whale was within my reach.
    • I am still very excited when I think about it now.
    • I remember that I saw a fishing net and I went down the river along a large fishing net.
    • It was very dark and overgrown with weeds.
    • When I went down the river, I saw something strange lying in a sock.
    • There were more dead fish than usual, maybe more than 100.
    • There were also three dead seals lying down.
    • Because they were covered with fish, it was difficult to identify them, but one of the seals was missing a large piece of its body.
    • Just then I looked up and saw a hole about 1.2 meters long on one side of the fishing net.
    • Oh my God, I was just a novice at the time, so I immediately told my companion, who asked me to leave immediately and sent an experienced guy to quickly repair the hole.
    • It turned out that the seals were killed by killer whales.
    • Somehow they panicked and passed through our fishing nets.
    • Killer whales are very common here.
    • They are the only animals that you must leave the water quickly if you see them.
    • Although it is not something supernatural, I remember that I was really scared and shivered that day. ”

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    • I remember one time when I was underwater, a very large killer whale was within my reach.
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    • I remember one time when I was underwater, a very large killer whale was within my reach.
      Je me souviens d’une fois (d’un instant, d'un moment) quand j'étais sous l'eau, qu'un très grand épaulard était à ma porté (était tout près de moi)
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    • I remember one time when I was underwater, a very large killer whale was within my reachje me souviens d'une fois où un gros épaulard était à ma portée.
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    • I remember that I saw a fishing net and I went down the river along a large fishing net.
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    • I remember that I saw a fishing net and I went down the river along a large fishing net.
      Je me souviens avoir vu un filet de pêche. Je suis descendu dans la rivière en longeant ce filet
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    • I remember that I saw a fishing net and I went down the river along a large fishing nje me souviens d'avoir( je me rappelle avoir) descendu la rivière en longeant ce filet.
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    • When I went down the river, I saw something strange lying in a sock.
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    • When I went down the river, I saw something strange lying in a sock.Malgré tout, j'ai vu quelque chose d'étrange couchée dans la chaussette ( ??)**
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    • Because they were covered with fish, it was difficult to identify them, but one of the seals was missing a large piece of its body.
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    • Because they were covered with fish, it was difficult to identify them, but one of the seals was missing a large piece of its body.
      C'était difficile de les identifier car ils étaient recouverts ( cachés) par les poissons. Pour l'un des trois, il manquait une partie de son corps
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    • Just then I looked up and saw a hole about 1.2 meters long on one side of the fishing net.
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    • Just then I looked up and saw a hole about 1.2 meters long on one side of the fishing net. Quand juste au moment où j'ai levé les yeux, j'ai vu un grand trou d'environ 1.20 m de long à côté du filet de pêche
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    • Oh my God, I was just a novice at the time, so I immediately told my companion, who asked me to leave immediately and sent an experienced guy to quickly repair the hole.
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    • Oh my God, I was just a novice at the time, so I immediately told my companion, who asked me to leave immediately and sent an experienced guy to quickly repair the hole.
      Oh, mon dieu !! J'étais encore novice à l'époque. Aussi j'avais immédiatement appelé mon camarade, Ce dernier me demanda de quitter immédiatement l'endroit et de prévenir une personne d'expérience pour réparer le trou.
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    • They are the only animals that you must leave the water quickly if you see them.
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    • They are the only animals that you must leave the water quickly if you see them. Ce sont des animaux( marins dangereux) quand vous les voyez (ou les apercevez) que l’on vous conseillera de sortir de l’eau et de regagner la plage
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    • Although it is not something supernatural, I remember that I was really scared and shivered that day. ”
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    • Although it is not something supernatural, I remember that I was really scared and shivered that day. ”
      Bien que ce ne soit pas surnaturel, je me souviens que c'était vraiment effrayant et qu'un frisson** me parcouru ce jour là
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