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Hello!
- Well, this is my first time writting here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my english.
- I hope, I can find good friends here!

aralishyJanuary 2013Undi sekarang!
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MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

Title
- Hello!
  Undi sekarang!
- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Title
Ayat 1
- Well, this is my first time writting here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my english.
  Undi sekarang!
- ~~Well, t~~This is my first time writting here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my eEnglish.
  pfaulty Ulasan
  
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- Well, this is mythe first time, i've writt~~ing~~en on here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my eEnglish.
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 1
Ayat 2
- I hope, I can find good friends here!
  Undi sekarang!
- I hope, I can find good friends here!
  pfaulty Ulasan
  
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- I hope, I can find some good friends here!
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- TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2