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Hello!
- Well, this is my first time writting here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my english.
- I hope, I can find good friends here!

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- Hello!
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Sentence 1
- Well, this is my first time writting here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my english.
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- ~~Well, t~~This is my first time writting here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my eEnglish.
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- Well, this is mythe first time, i've writt~~ing~~en on here, so I hope someone can help me to improve my eEnglish.
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Sentence 2
- I hope, I can find good friends here!
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- I hope, I can find good friends here!
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- I hope, I can find some good friends here!
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