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    • Nowadays, there are more than 7 billion people living on the planet and all of them need food.
    • Consequently, the food industries become producing food from chemicals because the biggest aim of the industry is to produce food faster, cheaper and in bigger quantities.
    • Dear audience, today I want to tell you about dangerous food, that we consume every day.
  • Nowadays, a lot of people suffer from overweight, but this is not the end of their problems, they are emotionally destroyed and their activity level is very low, possibly things mentioned above are the consequences of the poor quality food.
    • 80% of the food provided in supermarkets is dangerous and unfortunately, we consume at least one of it every day.
    • Overweight is mainly caused by products such as mayonnaise, margarine, ketchup and various souses; they all are mostly made by chemicals.
    • Furthermore, obesity is caused by every day’s most popular product- sugar, therefore, all nutritionists offer to replace sugar with honey to avoid the phenomenon called as ‘white death’.
  • When examining meat products provided in shops, it has been proven that there is no real meat.
    • The only thing that will be included is a flavoring, soy, pigs coat etc., and it is advised to buy the meat from farmers, where the meat would be natural.
    • Number one enemy to the healthy diet is fast food.
  • The first fast-food restaurant was established in 1921 in America, which became very popular with their burgers.
  • There were only 14 M.C.
  • Donald restaurants in America in 1956, but nowadays M.C.
  • Donald’s restaurants spread to 119 countries and in exceeds the number of 30 thousands.
  • For several people fast foods became a daily routine, they have forgotten about healthy food and the ways it have been cooked.
  • Those people’s breakfast starts at M.C Donald’s and finishes at the same place.
  • Latvia has only 11 M.C Donald restaurants and ten of them are located in the Riga with one located in Daugavpils.
  • In documentary film'' Super siz me'', the main character ate only fast-food meal-burgers, fries and Coca-Cola etc., for 30 days, at the end of the experiment, the main character increased his weight by 12 kg, his level of sugar grew dramatically, he was observed in radical mood changes and had changes in his prostate gland.
  • The main character was paid 50 thousand to return to the previous form.
  • The problem is, that people in modern society not only eat unhealthy food, but drink the unhealthy drinks.
  • Natural water has been already replaced for juices and lemonades from the stores, in particular with those popular drinks such as Coca-Cola or Pepsi which cause human enamel collapse.
  • Prolonged usage of those drinks causes abdominal ulcers, which may later evolve into a cancer.
  • One of the most dangerous alcohol drinks is beer.
  • Over the years, beer was considered as harmless drink, but recently there was a female hormone found in it which is called as estrogen.
  • That is why a big number of beer lovers have a big belly, bigger chests, changes in characteristics and physical problems.
  • However, in recent years there have been an increase in numbers of people who are against the unhealthy food.
  • In several states and cities there are bio-shops opened with fresh and healthy food that is grown in fields, of course, prices are adequate.
  • Documentary films about the consequences of dangerous food are more often shown on TV in order to protect people from buying it.
  • The figure shows rapid decrease of fast- food restaurants in majority of countries.
  • This entire means that people are again interested in healthy lifestyle and their appearance.
  • I urge the rest to turn to healthy diet.
  • Let’s respect ourselves, our health and our lifestyle.

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    • Consequently, the food industries become producing food from chemicals because the biggest aim of the industry is to produce food faster, cheaper and in bigger quantities.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ConsequentUnfortunately, the food industries becomehas started to producing food from chemicals because the biggest aim of the industry(GMO's) since one of its main aims is to produce food fastquicker, cheaper and in biglarger quantities.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • Nowadays, a lot of people suffer from overweight, but this is not the end of their problems, they are emotionally destroyed and their activity level is very low, possibly things mentioned above are the consequences of the poor quality food.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • 80% of the food provided in supermarkets is dangerous and unfortunately, we consume at least one of it every day.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • 80% of the food provided in supermarkets is dangerous and unfortunately, we consume at least one of it everythose food products a day.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • Overweight is mainly caused by products such as mayonnaise, margarine, ketchup and various souses; they all are mostly made by chemicals.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Overweightbesity is mainly caused by products such as mayonnaise, margarine, ketchup and various souses; they all are mostly made by chemicals.auces which are mostly likely been chemically made.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • Furthermore, obesity is caused by every day’s most popular product- sugar, therefore, all nutritionists offer to replace sugar with honey to avoid the phenomenon called as ‘white death’.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Furthermore, obesity is caused by every day’s most popular product- such as sugar, therefore, all nutritionists offer to replace sugar with honey to avoid the phenomenon called as ‘white death’.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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    • The only thing that will be included is a flavoring, soy, pigs coat etc., and it is advised to buy the meat from farmers, where the meat would be natural.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • The only thing that will beis included is a flavoring, soy, pigs coatskin etc., and i.. It is advised to buy the meat from farmers, where the meat would be natural.
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 9
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    • The first fast-food restaurant was established in 1921 in America, which became very popular with their burgers.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 11
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    • For several people fast foods became a daily routine, they have forgotten about healthy food and the ways it have been cooked.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 15
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    • Latvia has only 11 M.C Donald restaurants and ten of them are located in the Riga with one located in Daugavpils.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 17
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    • In documentary film'' Super siz me'', the main character ate only fast-food meal-burgers, fries and Coca-Cola etc., for 30 days, at the end of the experiment, the main character increased his weight by 12 kg, his level of sugar grew dramatically, he was observed in radical mood changes and had changes in his prostate gland.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 18
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    • The problem is, that people in modern society not only eat unhealthy food, but drink the unhealthy drinks.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 20
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    • Natural water has been already replaced for juices and lemonades from the stores, in particular with those popular drinks such as Coca-Cola or Pepsi which cause human enamel collapse.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 21
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    • Over the years, beer was considered as harmless drink, but recently there was a female hormone found in it which is called as estrogen.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 24ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 24
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    • That is why a big number of beer lovers have a big belly, bigger chests, changes in characteristics and physical problems.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 25
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    • However, in recent years there have been an increase in numbers of people who are against the unhealthy food.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 26
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    • In several states and cities there are bio-shops opened with fresh and healthy food that is grown in fields, of course, prices are adequate.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 27ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 27
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    • Documentary films about the consequences of dangerous food are more often shown on TV in order to protect people from buying it.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 28ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 28
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