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Tourism (school essay)
- Nowadays tourism is very popular.
- Some think that the tourism is a good way to have relax, while the others consider it to be environment destroying.
- In my opinion the tourism is not just a travel for recreational, leisure or business purposes; it is also a great opportunity to discover the world.
- Discovering means the familiarity with the environment in other countries, studying history and, of course, meeting new people.
- Therefore, people can organize inter-ethnic society.
- Small multicultural groups all over the world are the good beginning for making people unity.
- What is more, there are a lot of poor countries in Asia and Africa.
- Consequently, developing the tourist business is the only one method they can use to receive income from outside.
- However, some laymen think that the tourism contributes developing of serious problems such us disrespectful attitude to cultural monuments.
- Moreover, they are against flights over their cities, because it causes air pollution.
- Actually, there’s a widely held view that tourists are interested in exploring other countries, so they do not even think to destroy anything.
- As for the air pollution, planes do not deteriorate ecology as much as many factories around the world do.
- In conclusion, I would like to say that the tourism is promising and perspective trend, which we should improve to provide comfortable communication between people all over the Earth.
- leralovelifeDecember 2013Stem nou!
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