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Tourism (school essay)

• Some think that the tourism is a good way to have relax, while the others consider it to be environment destroying.

• In my opinion the tourism is not just a travel for recreational, leisure or business purposes; it is also a great opportunity to discover the world.

• Discovering means the familiarity with the environment in other countries, studying history and, of course, meeting new people.

• Therefore, people can organize inter-ethnic society.

• Small multicultural groups all over the world are the good beginning for making people unity.

• What is more, there are a lot of poor countries in Asia and Africa.

• Consequently, developing the tourist business is the only one method they can use to receive income from outside.

• However, some laymen think that the tourism contributes developing of serious problems such us disrespectful attitude to cultural monuments.

• Moreover, they are against flights over their cities, because it causes air pollution.

• Actually, there’s a widely held view that tourists are interested in exploring other countries, so they do not even think to destroy anything.

• As for the air pollution, planes do not deteriorate ecology as much as many factories around the world do.

• In conclusion, I would like to say that the tourism is promising and perspective trend, which we should improve to provide comfortable communication between people all over the Earth.