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Teks daripada vaness182 - English

    • November 22th.

  • Today is Friday, November 22th.
    • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products.
    • I love my mommy because, since the divorce, she do to all things for have her daugther happy.
    • The next year I'm going to study to another city, my girlfriend are going to study with me but in six months.
    • Just realized I have a great family, now, somebody here knocking at home door, but my mommy gave me some threads and I must take and bring to the last floor, but are much and I can't take anymore, and I must do two walks.
    • I don't like when the mommy's cellphone rings, 'cause it rings so high and I scare.
    • In that moment,my cellphone are ringing, always, I leave sound because I love the song that sound when my cellphone ring.
    • I love the electronic music, and the classical music, I feel so relaxing, or go in the car with the windon down and feel the breeze and remember all moments in my live.
    • I feel so scared for the next year, not for go to live alone, not, I feel so scared for the changes, go to the U, and left the school.
    • Now, shower time and I must order my things for tomorrow and have a great day, and finish the bracelets and do the cards and give it for my specials peoples in my live.

MOHON BANTU UNTUK BETULKAN SETIAP AYAT! - English

  • Title
  • Ayat 1
  • Ayat 2
    • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, we have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products.
    • Today I helped to my mommy in ther store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products where she sells beauty products and offers tailoring services. My mom is a remarkable woman.
    • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty productsr little store where we sell beauty products. My mommy is a Tailor. She is a great woman.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 2
  • Ayat 3
  • Ayat 4
    • The next year I'm going to study to another city, my girlfriend are going to study with me but in six months.
      Undi sekarang!
    • The next year I'm going to study ato another city, my girlfriend areis going to study with me but inonly six months.
    • The nNext year I'm going plan to study toin another city, m. My girlfriend are going to study with me butis planning on to join me in my studies in six months.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 4
  • Ayat 5
    • Just realized I have a great family, now, somebody here knocking at home door, but my mommy gave me some threads and I must take and bring to the last floor, but are much and I can't take anymore, and I must do two walks.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Just realized I have a great family, now, somebody here knocking at home door, but my mommy gave me some threads and I must take and bring to the last floor, but there are so much and I can't take anymore, and I must do two walksthreads that I have to go there twice.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 5
  • Ayat 6
  • Ayat 7
    • In that moment,my cellphone are ringing, always, I leave sound because I love the song that sound when my cellphone ring.
      Undi sekarang!
    • In that moment,But when my cellphone areis ringing, I always, I leave sound switched on, because I love the song that sound whenof my cellphone ring.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 7
  • Ayat 8
    • I love the electronic music, and the classical music, I feel so relaxing, or go in the car with the windon down and feel the breeze and remember all moments in my live.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I love the electronic music, and the classical music,. I feel so relaxing, or go in the when I go by car with the windon doww open and feel the breeze and remember all moments in my livfe.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 8
  • Ayat 9
    • I feel so scared for the next year, not for go to live alone, not, I feel so scared for the changes, go to the U, and left the school.
      Undi sekarang!
    • I feel so scared foram afraid of the next year, not for go tof liveing alone, not, I feel so scared foram afraid of the changes, going to the U, and leftaving the school.
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 9
  • Ayat 10
    • Now, shower time and I must order my things for tomorrow and have a great day, and finish the bracelets and do the cards and give it for my specials peoples in my live.
      Undi sekarang!
    • Now, it is shower time and. I must order my things for tomorrow and have a great day, and, finish the bracelets and domake the cards andto give it forto my specials peoples in my livfe. It will be a great day!
    • TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10TAMBAH PEMBETULAN YANG BARU! - Ayat 10