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    • November 22th.

  • Today is Friday, November 22th.
    • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products.
    • I love my mommy because, since the divorce, she do to all things for have her daugther happy.
    • The next year I'm going to study to another city, my girlfriend are going to study with me but in six months.
    • Just realized I have a great family, now, somebody here knocking at home door, but my mommy gave me some threads and I must take and bring to the last floor, but are much and I can't take anymore, and I must do two walks.
    • I don't like when the mommy's cellphone rings, 'cause it rings so high and I scare.
    • In that moment,my cellphone are ringing, always, I leave sound because I love the song that sound when my cellphone ring.
    • I love the electronic music, and the classical music, I feel so relaxing, or go in the car with the windon down and feel the breeze and remember all moments in my live.
    • I feel so scared for the next year, not for go to live alone, not, I feel so scared for the changes, go to the U, and left the school.
    • Now, shower time and I must order my things for tomorrow and have a great day, and finish the bracelets and do the cards and give it for my specials peoples in my live.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
    • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, we have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products.
    • Today I helped to my mommy in ther store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty products where she sells beauty products and offers tailoring services. My mom is a remarkable woman.
    • Today I helped to my mommy in the store, my mommy is a great woman, she are a tailor, have a little store, and the most important, we sell a beauty productsr little store where we sell beauty products. My mommy is a Tailor. She is a great woman.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Just realized I have a great family, now, somebody here knocking at home door, but my mommy gave me some threads and I must take and bring to the last floor, but are much and I can't take anymore, and I must do two walks.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Just realized I have a great family, now, somebody here knocking at home door, but my mommy gave me some threads and I must take and bring to the last floor, but there are so much and I can't take anymore, and I must do two walksthreads that I have to go there twice.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7
    • In that moment,my cellphone are ringing, always, I leave sound because I love the song that sound when my cellphone ring.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • In that moment,But when my cellphone areis ringing, I always, I leave sound switched on, because I love the song that sound whenof my cellphone ring.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 7
  • Zdanie 8
    • I love the electronic music, and the classical music, I feel so relaxing, or go in the car with the windon down and feel the breeze and remember all moments in my live.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I love the electronic music, and the classical music,. I feel so relaxing, or go in the when I go by car with the windon doww open and feel the breeze and remember all moments in my livfe.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 8
  • Zdanie 9
    • I feel so scared for the next year, not for go to live alone, not, I feel so scared for the changes, go to the U, and left the school.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I feel so scared foram afraid of the next year, not for go tof liveing alone, not, I feel so scared foram afraid of the changes, going to the U, and leftaving the school.
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 9
  • Zdanie 10
    • Now, shower time and I must order my things for tomorrow and have a great day, and finish the bracelets and do the cards and give it for my specials peoples in my live.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Now, it is shower time and. I must order my things for tomorrow and have a great day, and, finish the bracelets and domake the cards andto give it forto my specials peoples in my livfe. It will be a great day!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 10