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- my "going to sleep" rule
- never go to sleep before midnight and hungry

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- my "going to sleep" rule
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- my "going to sleep" rule=> My "sleeping" rule
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- my "going to ~~sleep~~bed" rule
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- never go to sleep before midnight and hungry
  Elige nunc !
- never go to sleep before midnight and hungry==> It should be "I never go to sleep before midnight nor when i am hungry/while being hungry"¶Or you could say" I have a tendency not to go to sleep early nor while being hungry"
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- never go to ~~sleep~~bed hungry before midnight ~~and hungry~~
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- ~~never go~~i'm not going to sleep before midnight and hungry
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