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HELPU KOREKTI NUN!Korektita

Text from JacobSVK - English

Originala Versio
Versio Korektita

- my "going to sleep" rule
- never go to sleep before midnight and hungry

JacobSVKNovember 2013Voĉdoni nun!
- Raporti kiel spamo?

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

Titolo
- my "going to sleep" rule
  Voĉdoni nun!
- my "going to sleep" rule=> My "sleeping" rule
  Tuedung Comments
  
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- my "going to ~~sleep~~bed" rule
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- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Titolo
Frazo 1
- never go to sleep before midnight and hungry
  Voĉdoni nun!
- never go to sleep before midnight and hungry==> It should be "I never go to sleep before midnight nor when i am hungry/while being hungry"¶Or you could say" I have a tendency not to go to sleep early nor while being hungry"
  Tuedung Comments
  
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  0% GOOD (2 votes)
- never go to ~~sleep~~bed hungry before midnight ~~and hungry~~
  LadyXX1 Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ~~never go~~i'm not going to sleep before midnight and hungry
  jehan Comments
  
  Raporti kiel spamo?
  
  Voĉdoni nun!
- ALDONI NOVAN KOREKTON - Frazo 1