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- Hello! How are u? I am well!
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- ToDay i was in Red Square, there was many tourist, they smile,walking, photos, more I was on training gymnastic. Day was good!!
  Bầu chọn ngay!
- ToDday i, I was in Red Square, and there wasere many tourist~~, they smile,~~s. They were smiling, walking, taking photos, and more while I was on training for gymnastics. D My day was good!!
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- ToDday iI was in Red Square, and there wasere many tourist~~, they smile,~~s. They were smiling, walking, taking photos, and more while I was on training for gymnastics. DToday was good!!
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- Say me , me is intresting!
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