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- Hello from Red Square !
- Hello! How are u? I am well!
- ToDay i was in Red Square, there was many tourist, they smile,walking, photos, more I was on training gymnastic. Day was good!!
- P.S How You spend day?
- Say me , me is intresting!

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- Hello from Red Square !
  투표하세요!
- Hello from Red Square !
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문장 1
- Hello! How are u? I am well!
  투표하세요!
- Hello! How are you? I am well!
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- ToDay i was in Red Square, there was many tourist, they smile,walking, photos, more I was on training gymnastic. Day was good!!
  투표하세요!
- ToDday i, I was in Red Square, and there wasere many tourist~~, they smile,~~s. They were smiling, walking, taking photos, and more while I was on training for gymnastics. D My day was good!!
  SurrenderNot 댓글
  
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- ToDday iI was in Red Square, and there wasere many tourist~~, they smile,~~s. They were smiling, walking, taking photos, and more while I was on training for gymnastics. DToday was good!!
  WanderSpeil 댓글
  
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
문장 3
- P.S How You spend day?
  투표하세요!
- P.S How Ydid you spend your day?
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문장 4
- Say me , me is intresting!
  투표하세요!
- Say ~~me , me i~~, my day was interesting!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4