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    • I watched a documentary other day about an over-weighed woman who has to lose some weight otherwise she is going to die in a period of time.
    • After searching and trying almost every known diet program on her own, she had decided to take a professional help.
    • As the result of her given health condition, she has consulted to a dietician.
    • At one point in the documentary, I have withness a conversation between the dietician and the woman; Doctor was saying that " I am going to help you with your problem as long as you do everything I will say", but as soon as he explained her the program, she said that " I couldn't stop eating despite I had tried this program before".
    • Therefore this case lead me to think that why don't we do the things good for us but do otherwise, even though many existing sources saying what's good and bad for us.
  • (I tried to keep it short for now but I wish to continue to write more about this later.)

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  • câu 1
    • I watched a documentary other day about an over-weighed woman who has to lose some weight otherwise she is going to die in a period of time.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • I watched a documentary other day about an over-weighedt woman who has to lose some weight otherwise she is going to die in a period of time.
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    • I watched a documentary other day about an over-weighedt woman who has to lose some weight otherwise she is going to die in a period of time.will die soon.
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  • câu 2
    • After searching and trying almost every known diet program on her own, she had decided to take a professional help.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • After searching and trying almost every known diet program on her own, she had decided to take aseek professional help.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • At one point in the documentary, I have withness a conversation between the dietician and the woman; Doctor was saying that " I am going to help you with your problem as long as you do everything I will say", but as soon as he explained her the program, she said that " I couldn't stop eating despite I had tried this program before".
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • At one point in the documentary, I have withnessed a conversation between the dietician and the woman; the Doctor was saying that " I am going to help you with your problem as long as you do everything I will say", but as soon as he explained her the program, she said that " I couldn't stop eating despite Iof had tried this program before".
      JoembJoemb profile picture Comments
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Therefore this case lead me to think that why don't we do the things good for us but do otherwise, even though many existing sources saying what's good and bad for us.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • Therefore this case lead me to think thatof why don't we do the things that are good for us but do otherwise, even though many existing sources saying what's good and bad for us.
      JoembJoemb profile picture Comments
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6