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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Poprawiono

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  • Priorities

    • I watched a documentary other day about an over-weighed woman who has to lose some weight otherwise she is going to die in a period of time.
    • After searching and trying almost every known diet program on her own, she had decided to take a professional help.
    • As the result of her given health condition, she has consulted to a dietician.
    • At one point in the documentary, I have withness a conversation between the dietician and the woman; Doctor was saying that " I am going to help you with your problem as long as you do everything I will say", but as soon as he explained her the program, she said that " I couldn't stop eating despite I had tried this program before".
    • Therefore this case lead me to think that why don't we do the things good for us but do otherwise, even though many existing sources saying what's good and bad for us.
  • (I tried to keep it short for now but I wish to continue to write more about this later.)

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

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  • Zdanie 1
    • I watched a documentary other day about an over-weighed woman who has to lose some weight otherwise she is going to die in a period of time.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • I watched a documentary other day about an over-weighedt woman who has to lose some weight otherwise she is going to die in a period of time.
      vonHikervonHiker profile picture Komentarze
    • I watched a documentary other day about an over-weighedt woman who has to lose some weight otherwise she is going to die in a period of time.will die soon.
      IonaBIonaB profile picture Komentarze 1
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
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  • Zdanie 4
    • At one point in the documentary, I have withness a conversation between the dietician and the woman; Doctor was saying that " I am going to help you with your problem as long as you do everything I will say", but as soon as he explained her the program, she said that " I couldn't stop eating despite I had tried this program before".
      Głosuj teraz!
    • At one point in the documentary, I have withnessed a conversation between the dietician and the woman; the Doctor was saying that " I am going to help you with your problem as long as you do everything I will say", but as soon as he explained her the program, she said that " I couldn't stop eating despite Iof had tried this program before".
      JoembJoemb profile picture Komentarze
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • Therefore this case lead me to think that why don't we do the things good for us but do otherwise, even though many existing sources saying what's good and bad for us.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • Therefore this case lead me to think thatof why don't we do the things that are good for us but do otherwise, even though many existing sources saying what's good and bad for us.
      JoembJoemb profile picture Komentarze
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6