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    • The classic Verdi’s opera modern masquerade in Helikon Opera theatre The Verdi’s opera “Un ballo in maschera” (A Masked Ball) is one of the most popular operas in the world.
    • But in Moscow it was set in Helikon Opera theatre by director and the founder and artistic director Dmitry Bertman for the first time.
    • He made up his mind to fill this omission up in honor of 200 Verdi’s anniversary.
    • Simone Firmani (Italy) was a band-master on premieres which were 4-5 of September.
    • He is only Verdi’s descendant.
    • His great-grandmother was adulterate Italian composer’s daughter.
    • The act of opera had been carried from 18’s century to end of 20, or maybe beginning of 21.
    • But it is most likely the second half of the 21st century, judging woman secretary’s laptop in the opening scene of the opera.
    • It is not important though.
    • The Dmitry Bertman’s wish to carry act of opera in our time, it is because this kind of plot is also relevant in 21’s century and characters of this opera are exist in modern world.
    • This sort of way is still not customary for Russian audience probably.
    • Not all the audience will please some moments of plot which Dmitry Bertman took and used to classic maybe.
    • For example, I did not feel pleasure in watching of Amelia’s character being played by the Helikon Opera actress Karina Flores who buys some sort of herb in rad lamp street to be cured of criminal passion to Count Warwick being played by the Helikon Opera actor Dmitry Ponomarev.
    • It is lake someone bays a drug from drug dealer ( it is a waste, where punishments are made by Verdi’s opera, and Amelia goes where by night to gather a magic grass).
    • The person will able to feel some kind of feeling (pleasant or unpleasant) in watching opera, if he (or she) went through something similar in his life himself I believe.
    • I don’t know if is it good or not for this opera.
    • It is right maybe, if plot is being carried to our time that ways and acts ought to be matched this time.

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    • The classic Verdi’s opera modern masquerade in Helikon Opera theatre The Verdi’s opera “Un ballo in maschera” (A Masked Ball) is one of the most popular operas in the world.
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    • The modern classic Verdi's opera modern masquerade inmasquerade Opera, takes place at the Helikon Opera theatre. The Verdi’s opera “Opera which is entitled : Un ballo ien mMaschera (A Masked Ball), is highly regarded (considered) as one of the most popular operas in the world.
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    • But in Moscow it was set in Helikon Opera theatre by director and the founder and artistic director Dmitry Bertman for the first time.
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    • But in Moscow it was set in Helikon Opera theatre by director andFurthermore, this popular Masquerade Opera, was first orchestrated and introduced to the city of Moscow by the founder and /artistic director, Mr. Dimitry Bertman for the first time.
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    • Simone Firmani (Italy) was a band-master on premieres which were 4-5 of September.
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    • An Italian by the name of Simone Firmani (Italy), was athe band- master on premieres which were 4-5 of September.ing days of September 4th to the 5th. He was also the only true descendant of Verdi.
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    • The Dmitry Bertman’s wish to carry act of opera in our time, it is because this kind of plot is also relevant in 21’s century and characters of this opera are exist in modern world.
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    • The Dimitry Bertman's wvish to carry act of opera in our time, it is because this kind of plot is also relevant in 21’s century and charaion/ability to bring opera to the mainstream, especially in the 21st century was made possible by his ability to connect the audience with the stories that were being depictersd ofn this opera are exist in modern worlde stage during the performances. He was able to modernize opera.
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    • Not all the audience will please some moments of plot which Dmitry Bertman took and used to classic maybe.
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    • Not allSome of the audience will please some moments of plot whichmembers were not pleased with the new approach of Dimitry Bertman, took and used to classic maybe.hey wanted opera the way it was meant to be presented. They wanted the opera that they were accustomed to.
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    • For example, I did not feel pleasure in watching of Amelia’s character being played by the Helikon Opera actress Karina Flores who buys some sort of herb in rad lamp street to be cured of criminal passion to Count Warwick being played by the Helikon Opera actor Dmitry Ponomarev.
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    • For example, I did not feel pleasure in watching of Amelia’s character being played by the Helikon Opera actress Karina Flores who buys some sort of instance, some people in the audience were displeased with Karina Flores' portrayal of the character Amelia, who attempted to use herbs in rad lamp street order to be cured of herself of the criminal passion to Count Warwick being played by the Helikon Operaafflicted upon her by Count Warwick, a character portrayed by actor Dimitry Ponomarev.
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    • It is lake someone bays a drug from drug dealer ( it is a waste, where punishments are made by Verdi’s opera, and Amelia goes where by night to gather a magic grass).
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    • It is lake someone bays acomparable to buying drugs from a drug dealer ( it is a waste, where punishments are made by Verdi’s opera, and Amelia goes where by night to gather a magic grass).
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    • The person will able to feel some kind of feeling (pleasant or unpleasant) in watching opera, if he (or she) went through something similar in his life himself I believe.
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    • The person will able to feel some kind of feeling (pleasant or unpleasant) in watching opera, iy say misery loves company, this saying is also applicable to the opera, people tend to love stories that they can somehow relate to. If the (or she) went through something similar in hisy can relate to the story, they will lifke himself I believethe show.
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    • It is right maybe, if plot is being carried to our time that ways and acts ought to be matched this time.
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    • It is right maybe, if plot is being carried to our time that ways and acts ought to be matched this time. ¶However, if the plays/performances are for the modern audiences, then the plots ought to appeal the modern audiences.
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