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- War or not war
- In this moment there is seriously an argument epidemic in some parts of the world in order to do militaries interventions in a country who did worse actions on his citizens.
- I think the international community must sit down together to have a mediation talks in order to reach an agreement to improve the situation of hundred thousand innocent persons.
- Because they will be the first to die.
Peace and love.

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- War or not war
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- In this moment there is seriously an argument epidemic in some parts of the world in order to do militaries interventions in a country who did worse actions on his citizens.
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- ~~In this moment there is~~Currently, there are some serious~~ly an~~ argument ~~epidemic in some~~s taking place in different parts of the world ion ~~order to do~~whether or not militar~~ies~~y interventions is necessary in a country who ~~did worse actions on his citizens~~se own citizens committed crimes against their own people.
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- InAt thise moment, there ~~is seriously an argument epidemic~~are widespread arguments in some parts of the world ~~in order to do~~as regards the call for militar~~ies~~y interventions in a countr~~y who did worse actions on his citizen~~ies that infringed their citizens' rights.
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- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 1
Oració 2
- I think the international community must sit down together to have a mediation talks in order to reach an agreement to improve the situation of hundred thousand innocent persons.
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- ~~I think t~~The international community must sit down together ~~to have a mediation talk~~and engage in peaceful discussions in order to reach an agreement to improve the situation of hundreds of thousands of innocent pe~~rsons~~ople (or lives).
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- I think the international community must ~~sit down together to have a mediation talks in order to reach an agreement~~convene and agree on possible ways to improve the situation of hundreds of thousands of innocent pe~~rsons~~ople.
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- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 2
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- Because they will be the first to die.
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- ~~Because they~~With out these peace talks, these innocent people will be the first to die.
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- ~~Because they~~If not, these innocent people will be the first to die.
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- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 3
Oració 4
- Peace and love.
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- Afegeix una nova correcció. - Oració 4

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War or not war

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